AERODYNAMICALLY GIFTED

AERODYNAMICALLY GIFTED

A Poem by R J Askew
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The voice here is that of the poems all around us. The Jack of Duds is the lost and lonely poet experiencing a magically blessed moment of revelation, of oneness with mother universe.

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We are the code they seek to crack
Beyond, behind, above, below
We are without* intelligence          
In primacy supreme we chyme
With otherness we deftly rhyme
Instinctuality alive
We show ourselves but now are gone
You can but breathe and sense us pass
Alone you are, alone, alone
Our conduit corporeal
You are so feeble in your form
O Jack of Duds, lost in the woods!

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We are the code they'll never crack

 Sir Nothing stretched out on the wrack

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© 2012 R J Askew


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We are the code they'll never crack... this explains it all,,,nice read

Posted 12 Years Ago


Poems all around us beyond, behind, above, below all connected to the aptly named universe....... nice write, very cryptic.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the cryptic tone and surreal/esoteric/mystsery herein.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Quite an intersting and intriguing read. Enjoyed it though

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Posted 12 Years Ago


A lot of these poems are definitely uncrackable.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


R J Askew

12 Years Ago

:))) yep, I am mindful of that. I like writing nice open ones, but the odd complex one sneaks in! T.. read more
Not quiet myself today .. I'll return and reread .. so I may better understand ..

Jasmine :)

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Posted 12 Years Ago



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