the i between my eyes

the i between my eyes

A Poem by Ray
"

I actually have a scar shaped like an 'i' between my eyes which came from near death event.

"
the i between my eyes
marks a second life
coming to going to love.
eye come in search
for recognition, only
i acknowledge
to late, two few.
tis a joke love can be
when infatuation fuels
building pressure across upperscrapes. frag
menting laughter between my cries. 

© 2014 Ray


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Interesting scar. I think I may have become lost in this piece. I like the idea of eye/I. The last two lines of this left me puzzled. What do you mean by "upperscrapes"?

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Added on November 6, 2014
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Tags: infatuation, love, life, death, sad

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Ray
Ray

Toronto, Canada



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