Cold Death of Life

Wrote this poem for school, it had to be winter themed.

What is winter

but the death of life

or perhaps it’s a chance

at a new beginning

Where the leaves once shown high above us in the trees are now cold sad hopeless branches

Beautiful rays of sun overcome by the darkness will it ever return to warm the frozen ground beneath us

Animals hiding away in warm shelters they've made not knowing exactly when this cold miserable season will end

Reviews

[Chris Atkinson]

Fantastic poem, very well writen.

"for every winter theres a summer, the same as for every bad time there's a good one round the corner"

when i say theres always a summer, it doesn't always work like that if like me your from england ha

I am looking forward to reading the rest of your poetry x

[shawnt5604]

I enjoyed this, nice write!

[Sam Ryann]

Truly Amazing, keep up the great work.


100/100

[Patience]

xoxo (: thanks

[Mel Lisa]

the melancholy of this read is excellent. It really describes the mood of winter well. I could actually vision you sitting by a window observing and writing this on a cold winter day:) hope you got an A!

[Patience]

I did! thank you(:

[Mel Lisa]

awesome! your welcome:)