Love that's beyond words

Love poem for my boyfriend<3

The way you smile

  when your lips touch mine

    is a feeling that I live for

      and it stays with me forever

Time stops when our eyes meet

  I see the love, the passion

    that fills your beautiful heart

      when you look at me

When we first met

  our lives had changed forever-

    we fell beyond in love

      and there was no way of hiding it 

The stars shine brighter when I fell asleep-

  with the thought of you on my mind

    and the comforting hum of your voice 

      that lulls me to sleep

My love for you is beyond words

  our hearts and souls have become one

    nothing will ever split up-

      the connection we have created 

I love you more than the moon and the sun

  you are the king, and I am the queen-

    of an amazing life; a flawless story

      that I cannot wait to spend with you

Author's Note

Is it too cheesy?

Reviews

[Aphy!]

I absolutely love and relate well with love poems/stories. This by far took the cake. I felt...like you were reading my thoughts as I read this poem. I really loved reading it and I love the flow of it. The emotion behind it is amazing.Time stops when our eyes meet
I see the love, the passion
that fills your beautiful heart
when you look at me
My favorite stanza!
Thank you for this lovely piece
Aphy

[Chris Atkinson]

No this is defenatly not cheesy at all, Love tends to brick raw emotions out. I think this is a beautiful poem and very well writen. I raly love this one x

[Daydreamer]

(The stars shine brighter when I fell asleep-

with the thought of you on my mind)
Such a beautiful line

[Sam Ryann]

Nope, not cheesy at all. The detail you put into this is amazing. Thanks for sharing c:

100/100

[Jordan]

Not too cheesy at all - have a little more confidence. You write well.

[Patience]

Thank you very much!