"Nothing"

Its a poem about nothing..thanks Jerry

Nothing to lose, nothing to gain,

Nothing but sorrow, nothing but pain,

Nothing to love, nothing to hate,

Nothing is nothing i cant tolerate.

Nothing to do, nothing to see,

Nothing for you, nothing for me,

Nothing to rise, nothing to fall,

Nothing from nothing leaves nothing at all.

Nothing to say, nothing to think,

Nothing to smoke, nothing to drink,

Nothing to give, nothing to take,

Nothing from something is something I make.

Nothing to feel, nothing to hear,

Nothing to boo, nothing to cheer,

Nothing to worship, no one to thank,

Nothing is everything, everythings blank.

Reviews

[doctor's diagnosis]

at first i thought the repeated nothing would be bad, but you know, i actually really like it. good job on this one.

[T. L. O'Neal]

Very thought provoking poem and each line could stand alone as itself. T

[Valorie J. Shearer]

Wow.. Heavy! Everything is everything - just my own spin on this.. You have a great talent; onward and forward!!! Take care~~~