"Nothing"

Its a poem about nothing..thanks Jerry

Nothing to lose, nothing to gain,

Nothing but sorrow, nothing but pain,

Nothing to love, nothing to hate,

Nothing is nothing i cant tolerate.

Nothing to do, nothing to see,

Nothing for you, nothing for me,

Nothing to rise, nothing to fall,

Nothing from nothing leaves nothing at all.

Nothing to say, nothing to think,

Nothing to smoke, nothing to drink,

Nothing to give, nothing to take,

Nothing from something is something I make.

Nothing to feel, nothing to hear,

Nothing to boo, nothing to cheer,

Nothing to worship, no one to thank,

Nothing is everything, everythings blank.

Reviews

[Rooney]

Wow.
You sure as hell know how to capture, even stir up and create emotion.
VEry, very, very well done.
I enjoyed it very much.
Oh, and by the way,
welcome to writerscafe.org

[will everette]

Wow I loved this Poem keep up the good work!!

[Kenji Light]

This is good stuff. I mean, it's simple but that is what makes this piece good. The rhyme scheme moves almost flawlessly and you really manage to make a couple of deep statements in this almost laid back piece.

[[TaTo]� The Wolf]

I like it.. =)

[Dorothy]

I like this one alot! It is interesting what you can write about nothing! Great job!

[Roger Ferguson II]

good job
normaly stuff about nothing is kinda boring, but this was intresting ^_^

[chr66is]

This is awesome. I really dig the flow and the wordplay. Very clever stuff. Welcome to the Cafe!
Peace,
Chris

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

This piece actually says a lot for being about nothing. It has a great flow to it as well. Nicely done.



Great Write

[Fran Marie]

A great write so well expressed~Fran Marie

[Ryan Jaimz Knight]

This piece says so much, even though the message is wrapped up in a deceptive skin of simplicity. True, the caps were a bit distracting since in the online world they are used in reference to shouting, but the speaker of this poem is quite literally shouting their message, and for that the caps are decidedly appropriate. Keep up the great work, I look forward to reviewing more of your writing in the future.
BJH