The Innocence of a child

The Innocence of a child

A Poem by Onlyme

I saw this happen
the other day
in a supermarket.

A sweet child
barely say
5 yrs of age,
in the store.

Shouting to her mother
she was going to get her
a carton of milk.
She needs her shopping.

Off she trots to get it.
Full of happiness and joy.
Bringing it back with
such glee and eagerness.

And saying to her mother
here is your milk?
As the mother says Thankyou.
And the little girl shouting out loud.
your very welcome mummy.

And then off,
she runs to get some
bread from a shelve
close by
shouting again.

I am away to get some bread for
your mum.
Thank you, sweetheart.
Says Mum again.

I thought may so adorably sweet
and wholesome.
So eager to please,
innocence and such
charmingly pure kindness
and helpfulness.

Then we grow up
into adults and
lose that innocence
and sweetness
of the world
in general
and that is
so sad to me.

As we should all
have that innocence
and sweetness,
about us all.

Through our life.
Soppy but true.
In my perspective of life.

As when you grow up
reality and life is far
from both sweet or
innocent.

Long may it last for
children to grow up with
both Innocence and sweetness.

© 2019 Onlyme


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When I was a kid, I always felt too precocious for my age, and wanted to grow up as soon as possible. I thought Peter Pan was a stupid character, but now that I'm a grown up, I understand its appeal. Good observational skills, Dawn...made me picture the innocent child quite vividly.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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The sweetness of childhood never lasts as long as it should. It is a joy to watch little children in their innocense. You capture the child beautifully.

Posted 5 Years Ago


So true Dawn-- childhood is the only time we get to live in our own world, and it's such a finer world....

Posted 5 Years Ago


Life sometimes takes away our innocence and kindness. But the brave are able to fight back and reclaim their kindness. Much love Dawn
Love Zipho

Posted 5 Years Ago


You are certainly right about us adults forgetting that innocent spirit of a child.
We let society's various worries bog us down to bitterness, jealousy, fear, envy and self-interest.

But hope is not lost. We can consciously awaken our inner child and become truly wonderful people in our relationships and daily interactions with others, whilst still, of course, aware of the realities of adulthood.
We must allow more playfulness and forgiveness in our lives..

Well done!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Hi BlackPrince, thankyou for your thoughts, sorry for late reply not on here much of late. And just .. read more
Beautiful work! Well done Dawn.
-Ethan

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Thank you Ethan, that was so kind of you to say. Dawn.
'Then we grow up - into adults and lose - that innocence - and sweetness - of the world - in general - and that is - so sad to me. '

Judging by what i see and hear - little children do things because they want to please, want to give and share smiles. But, as age takes control, so many do what they need to, for what's thought is deserved or what's thought to advantage selves. Yes, perhaps a cynical view of life but how truth smacks me in the eye. Not yet found that in a small child - may discover differently of course.

Meantime, bring me a clutch of buttercups and daisies!. Then, will willingly read and learn repeatedly from your wonderfully laid writing, Dawn. Sincerely and oh so graphically you've touched my heart and inspired me to think harder but - far less harshly.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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emmajoy

5 Years Ago

You're welcome, Dawn; we need reminders now and again.
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

sadly so true. Emmajoy.
So true, so true Dawn. The sweetness of childhood seems to fade so quickly now. Our children are faced with a world that takes their innocence. The presentation of the little girl in your poem is enchanting. You describe her in such endearing detail. Your bolded verse and heartfelt plea at the end really touched my heart. Beautiful write.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Bless you Annette, you are a beautiful lady inside and out. Hugs, Dawn.
Annette Pisano-Higley

5 Years Ago

Xoxo........:))🙏❤️
Experiences and true face of people make us lose our innocence and make us more self centered
Your poem depicts it well
Good job

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Thank you dear Muskan. That is so very true. Dawn.
Great read, as always, Dawn, the innocence of youth, to be that age again, without the s**t and the bullshit, must be a joyous thing, but in the supermarket they are "Supermarket chaos", and you know what I mean.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Cheers Gram, you made me smile, as to the supermarket chaos its gone for good. Deleted it. Maybe try.. read more
Your poem sent me wandering Dawn. That lovely innocence, where does it go? I lost mine early enough. I picked flowers for my Nan who didn't have any from a neighbour's garden. I got a good whacking for that.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Hi Chris, sorry for late reply bless you for your thoughts. Dawn.
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

You are welcome Dawn.

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