The Ultimate F**k YOU.

It is not nice to see someone

being pushed over the edge.

The mental edge.

I am on about.

To see them start to disappear

and to maybe

be gone for good

this time.

Their are sulen, broken and are

a ghost of yesterday.

Crumbled and damaged.

Their skin is gray or ghostly white.

they are erratic, lethargic and paranoid.

Weak, rotting and sores.

They are nothing like they used to be.

Before they pushed themselves beyond

the limits of who they once were.

Our human minds and bodies

can only cope with so much abuse

before it kicks back. And either give

you an almighty jolt into reality or

kills you. And you're gone for good.

The ultimate. F**k You...

Reviews

[Neville]

there is a point which varies from one individual to every other that beyond which, there can be no additional give.. that point of flexibility when snap occurs... Each person has their own 'critical point' where without some help, support or intervention, they break or bruise... no one person should be responsible for the breaking and or bruising of another... a sad, but necessary post I think Dawn.... N :

[Onlyme]

Thanks, Neville, I agree totally with you everyone has that critical point. Cheers. Dawn.

[Neville]

Pleasure my friend :)

[Dave]

Dawn this is heart wrenching! To have suffered so much abuse. Like you I can not stand to see someone being abused, having experienced it myself. He is long gone now, but the memory is just a thought away.

Take care - Dave

[Onlyme]

Hi David, So sorry to hear you can relate as had your own tormentor to when you were younger. Thinking of you. Dawn.

[Dave]

Oh Dawn - it's long forgotten except for the lessons I learned from it. I have never, ever hit my children and never would, though on reflection I'm sure there may have been times when they deserved it. No! I'm lying! Honestly Millie and I were very fortunate - I don't believe the thought ever crossed our minds. Thanks though, for your concern.

Take care - Dave

[Onlyme]

I understand Dave, it helped you see what a good decent parent was for your own kids. :)

[gram linski]

The Ultimate f**k you, Dawn, do you struggle on, or curl up and die quietly inside, who is the bravest of the two? good poem.

[Onlyme]

i struggle on and do the two finger salute to my own demons of being abused as a kid by my parents, mentally, physically etc. And be the best for me, been done counselling etc and now i just want to be happy for me.

[Onlyme]

gram two finger salute your own demons and be happy for you now.

[gram linski]

I shake hands with the m***********s, and buy those fools a drink,

[Paul Bell]

The human body can take a lot of abuse, you see it enough every day.
But like everything else, it has its limit, that includes mental torture along with the drugs.

[Onlyme]

Cheers Paul.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, it is the ultimate...once we abuse the body or mind for so long and so much there is no coming back from it...we become ghosts of yesterday...uneasy ghosts...

j.

[Onlyme]

So very True Jacob. Just it hurts to sit back and see someone destroy themself. When you see such goodness.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i hear ya...have seen enough of these folks in my lifetime...
j.

[Onlyme]

It so sad and cruel when you cant even see your own goodness no more. That to me is heartbreaking.