Very entertaining look at America's national bird. Also a favorite critter in Native American lore. You give us crisp imagery to transport us to join you on your grassy knoll vantage point. If ever I can post my own tribute to the eerily mysterious bird, I will request a "read request" from you. Well done.
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
Thank you bigfootprint, I must admit, I love this amazing bird as you can tell. Bless you for the c.. read moreThank you bigfootprint, I must admit, I love this amazing bird as you can tell. Bless you for the compliment too. Hugs. Dawn.
Thanks, Doug, You made my day, My spell and grammar is not great but my heart is in the write place... read moreThanks, Doug, You made my day, My spell and grammar is not great but my heart is in the write place. Cheers Dawn.
5 Years Ago
Not to worry, Dawn. We poets have only ourselves to disappoint -- with not much chance of that.
I love the details of your description of this magnificent bird. Several years ago while channel hopping I came across a National Geographic film on the eagle. I was to say the least fascinated by his ability at flight. He did things I didn't think possible - it was amazingly beautiful. I found myself shedding tears over the beauty of what I was seeing. Needless to say of all of them, the eagle is my favorite bird.
Take care and thanks for the wonderful poem. - Dave
Very entertaining look at America's national bird. Also a favorite critter in Native American lore. You give us crisp imagery to transport us to join you on your grassy knoll vantage point. If ever I can post my own tribute to the eerily mysterious bird, I will request a "read request" from you. Well done.
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Years Ago
Thank you bigfootprint, I must admit, I love this amazing bird as you can tell. Bless you for the c.. read moreThank you bigfootprint, I must admit, I love this amazing bird as you can tell. Bless you for the compliment too. Hugs. Dawn.
Thanks, Doug, You made my day, My spell and grammar is not great but my heart is in the write place... read moreThanks, Doug, You made my day, My spell and grammar is not great but my heart is in the write place. Cheers Dawn.
5 Years Ago
Not to worry, Dawn. We poets have only ourselves to disappoint -- with not much chance of that.
An incredible moment to try and capture, but you've done a stunning job. The internal rhyme on 'regal eagle' is really lovely. I would say maybe have a second look over this just for spelling errors and such, but the tone of the poem is truly majestic!!