Value Life...Even when it breaks You.

Value Life...Even when it breaks You.

A Poem by Onlyme

The fragility of the human being
is just a beating heart away
from existence.

One minute we can be here.
Breathing and alive.
To then next gone for good.

As once the last breath
has been drawn.
We are no more.
Into the ether
like a cloudless vapour
transcending into everything
odorless and colourless
invisible to the human eye.

Yet touches and leaves a
print. Of who we where
spiritual wise as in our
essence on earth.

God gave us life.
And god taketh
But he also leaves
us memories,
moments, gifts
and reminders of
loved ones gone
but never forgotten.

We have to hold onto
hope, faith, love and
each new day.
Like as though tomorrow
never cometh.

And live for now.

And cherish everything
more so. Value life and
living. Even those times.
it's even hard to deal with.

I know that was is very hard
to do believe me.
But its worth it long run.
As you are breathing.
And above ground not under.

© 2019 Onlyme


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Chris - you are so, so right. We all must cherish life and those that live it with us. I just turned 78 and though I have a few aches and pains they are nothing compared to what I've seen others endure. Each day I thank God for the beautiful day I'm going to be able to enjoy. To have and share love with the woman I can only begin to show my appreciation to.
It is so good to be reminded as you said to cherish everything and to value life.
Take care - Dave

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Thanks Dave.



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I totally agree with you..Value life even when there are many difficulties in your life..I know that living life is the toughest thing to do but that is how it is..Life is never a bed of roses , there will be difficulties , you will have to face them..Its like day and night..There will be those dark , scary nights in your life but they will pass to bring a day..You know I feel that facing difficulties is better than to die because at least you are breathing , you are full of life ..I know that life might seem like a burden which you have to carry unneccessarily sometimes but you have no other option to do .. It is the way it is..Powerful poem with a strong message..
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing..
Take care maasi...

Posted 5 Years Ago


Hello Dawn! It's been awhile I missed reading these kinds of poems. Simple but with a powerful message. Thanks so much for sharing this Dawn! This kinda helped me have hope, thanks. I'm quite lost right now and I have no idea where I am heading but this gave me direction. Thank you!
it is beautifully written as well! A job well done!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed it. And hopefully it helps you. I am a simple, straight forward person. As you know.. read more
Chris - you are so, so right. We all must cherish life and those that live it with us. I just turned 78 and though I have a few aches and pains they are nothing compared to what I've seen others endure. Each day I thank God for the beautiful day I'm going to be able to enjoy. To have and share love with the woman I can only begin to show my appreciation to.
It is so good to be reminded as you said to cherish everything and to value life.
Take care - Dave

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Thanks Dave.

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Tags: life, living, death, alive, human, fragility, value.

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Onlyme
Onlyme

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Dawn Dawn

A Poem by Onlyme