Struggles...

To feel abandonedly alone

and as if, no one actually

cares about you.

If you either live or die.

Is such a wicked and nasty overpowering

feeling to have ever experienced

or even feel.

The suffering mental turmoil that goes

on inside your heart, mind and soul.

crushes you deeply and makes you feel worthless

and so isolated.

That you're overwhelmingly distraught,

at being so unloved and uncared for

in this daily existence on earth.

You just wish to curl up and die.

And just be gone for good.

But something inside you keeps on

trudging on. And trying to make the

best of what you do have. Breath in

your lungs. And a voice in your mouth.

But no one to talk with our gives you

comfort or love. But for yourself,

you try to live just that little bit longer.

Struggling and determined to exsist on earth.

Alive.

Reviews

[Coffee Lady]

I like the way you describe your experience. There is a bluntness that I can appreciate. That said, sometimes you don't use imagery when it would be easy to do so. You occasionally just state what is going on for you point-blank without much word play. For this reason, I can't rate it very highly, despite the fact that it is quite raw. Thank you for the read!

[Onlyme]

Thanks for your thoughts Coffee Lady. Dawn.