None stop...

Sometimes I feel,

I am just an emotional wreck.

And I am living off my nervous

and turning out,

nonstop poetic drivel

to ease my woes

and suffering.

My mind is whirling around

and around

never stopping or sleeping

on a constant loop

it goes around.

Thinking of this

and thinking of that.

Not stopping

always something

is playing on

inside my mind.

Hurry hurry hurry or

you will be late.

For insomnia and sleep.

That is for babies and wimps.

It's more mental exhaustion

anxiety and stress.

Of everyday living

that is

upsetting me so.

F**k this.. f**k that.

f**k everyone.

I am superhuman

oh, Christ!

No, I am NOT.

BURNT OUT then finally fast asleep

in a comatosed state of exhaustion.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I do understand this poem. Too much to do and no time to do.
"BURNT OUT then finally fast asleep
in a comatosed state of exhaustion."
One day, a week. I must stop and rest. Thank you Dawn for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Onlyme]

I get the impression you work far to hard Coyote. Need to rest and rejuvenate. And thank you. Dawn.

[Coyote Poetry]

Grandchildren, work and I must read and write. A busy man stayed out of trouble. You are welcome Dawn.

[Onlyme]

that is very true Coyote, wise words. :)

[emmajoy]

Life sweeps us up and away, takes us to places and into situations we don't ask for, don't want but accept.. because we feel we should. Maybe, just maybe, we should just stand and look.. and look.. and see? We're not puppets, strung up like trussed chickens etc. We're born cussers and shouters who have the right to yell - and sleep.. and stop.. and think.. and write and.. be.

Wonderful writing, Dawn, finely laid, emotionally uttered and consequently felt by yours truly... and undoubtedly your loving fans. Thank you for each and every word - now then.. GO SLEEP, GIRL!

[Onlyme]

Thanks emmajoy

[emmajoy]

Glad and willing to give you time and thought, Dawn.

[Ryan I]

I feel this as my head is always moving around in thought and sometimes I just want it to stop. I write poems too to get out my thoughts. I wish the best for you.

[Onlyme]

Ryan, I relate big time to you, and it does help, use your writing to heal you and help you feel better for you, self expression is the key to a better tomorrow long term honest. Dawn. be heard and I hear you Ryan.I

[FJ Davis]

A poetic tale familiar to anyone who's driven to write.
Powerfully portrayed, Dawn!

[Onlyme]

Thank you Frank, kind of you to say. bless you. Dawn.

[just is]

WOW!! very strong wording and very well presented. I enjoyed this write.

[Onlyme]

Thanks Hoosier Girl.

[just is]

not a problem... Keep writing always

[Onlyme]

thanks you.

[The ArK]

It happens with everyone. Today's fast paced lifestyle is setting things in a wrong direction. It's now about how fast you can do instead of how good you can do. No one seem to understand the value of getting a break for good.

[Onlyme]

well said and totally agree with you. Thanks for your thoughts. Dawn.

[m3lody mae]

Wow! A lot of deepness to this write. nicely presented

[Onlyme]

Thanks dalton.

[m3lody mae]

not a problem

[poetgurl]

Such a wonderful write here. Not much on cuss words, But i did enjoy the write. wonderful write

[Onlyme]

I have my moments on cuss words believe me LOL. Glad you enjoyed the read. thanks Dawn.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I do relate to this one here, but I suppose we all feel like this at times...ah, if only a thing as being a superhuman existed...Living through it all and surviving still is what makes us humans though..
The mind never stops thinking, unfortunately.
Good write, Dawn.

[Onlyme]

Thank you Dr. Yumnakay, I take that a big compliment from you that it's a good write. bless you Dawn.

[An owl on the moon]

So powerfully moving, deeply impassioned... I am certain a lot of us here can relate too well to these struggles, this aching life, the emotions ripping through us like a wild river. Your words speak into us and let us know we're not alone in our suffering... May we all find peace.

[Onlyme]

Thank you, An owl on the moon for your thoughts bless you. Dawn.