Raining

Raining

Relaxing 

      alluring

            intense

                 nurturing.

flowing within my

heart mind and soul.

As my body is wet

like a baptism of spiritual cleansing.

Reviews

[richieb]

I certainly enjoyed your poem. I imagine sitting on my front porch covered with a metal roof. The sound of the rain is so relaxing and refreshing. These are the images your beautiful words created in my mind.
Blessings,
Richie b.

[Onlyme]

thank you Richieb that was so kind of you to say. Dawn

[AYVID N]

Rain can be very rejuvenating. Especially the first rainburst of the season after a prolonged, parched summer. I appreciate the powerful portrayal very much Dawn 💕

[Onlyme]

Bless you, DIVYA.

[AYVID N]

Thank you Dawn 💕

[Kay]

I enjoy this positive approach to rain. I've known a lot of people who find it depressing or gloomy, but I feel the same way your adjectives describe it in the poem - relaxing, alluring, intense, nurturing. The last line is lovely.

[Onlyme]

Thank you Kay, that was really lovely of you to say. hugs. Dawn.

[Kay]

You're very welcome, hugs to you too. =)

[Neville]

This is precisely what I mean.. a splendid little freshwater seed pearl of a poem, if ever there was.... N

[Onlyme]

Neville, bless you. Dawn.

[Neville]

because ya worth it..

[Onlyme]

Now you would make me cry Neville.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This one's lovely. It is indeed a cleansing of sorts, perhaps more so of memories...
Nicely laid. :)

[Onlyme]

Thank you Dr. Yumnakay.