Tater-Tot the pug.

Tater-Tot the pug.

A Poem by Onlyme



Little sweet Tater-tot,
is an adorable little pug.

She is only 6 months old.
with a scrunched up wrinkled face.

Those big dark flying saucer eyes.
Along with that petted lip.
She uses to get more treats.

Playful and mischievous, cute as
can be.

"Tommy our cat" is 3 years old.
Loves to play with Tater-Tot
and they both get along.
A great double act.
When left to their own devices.

They even love to cuddle up
together and have long naps.
In Tater-tot's bed.

And when we take Tater-tot
out for a little walk,
Tommy is not far behind
in the gardens and bushes.
Making sure she is okay.

© 2018 Onlyme


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I love pieces that don't take themselves too seriously, and this is one of them! You've done a good job of personifying their relationship, but i'd almost like to know a little bit more about the two of them as individuals.. Their relationship is painted very strongly, but I do worry you lose a bit of their individuality in it. Basically I like animals and i'd like to know more about them haha

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Cheers Patrick and for the tips. Dawn.



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I love pieces that don't take themselves too seriously, and this is one of them! You've done a good job of personifying their relationship, but i'd almost like to know a little bit more about the two of them as individuals.. Their relationship is painted very strongly, but I do worry you lose a bit of their individuality in it. Basically I like animals and i'd like to know more about them haha

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Cheers Patrick and for the tips. Dawn.
This is a true firndship.. they're lucky to have each other.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Thanks sweetheart. Glad you liked it.

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Added on November 29, 2018
Last Updated on November 29, 2018
Tags: pug, puppy, dog, Tater-tot

Author

Onlyme
Onlyme

United Kingdom



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Dawn Dawn

A Poem by Onlyme