20 great years.

20 great years.

A Poem by Onlyme

He was the runt of the little.
So tiny but just something
about him was so endearing.

He had a deformed back left leg.
And had a little bend in his spine
near his hips.

But this little soul.
Was never unhappy or sad.
He always gave his all.
Against his brothers and sisters.
They accepted him.
And teased him a little at times.
And other times. They licked him
and cuddled up to him for warmth
and love while they all slept together.

When he grew stronger and healthier.

A young couple adopted him.
And called him Fred.

He was as happy as a little King.
In his new doggie life.

And lived to a grand all age of
20 doggy years. With Linda & Bill
who adored him beyond words.

© 2018 Onlyme


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Reminds me of an unwanted kitten we acquired. Trust me to choose the damaged one; a kitten with one eye (the other eye completely missing, the eye socket closed, and furred over)...or Dusty, a little grey kitten with a deformed leg.
We took him to the vet, who recommended amputation, as this left, front leg was impeding him.
Once that leg was off, Dusty came into his own! He still limped when he was walking, but when he ran--a blur! You couldn't tell there was anything at all wrong with him!
He died at 17, which is a good old age.
I enjoyed your memorial tribute, Dawn.
I noticed two things.
I think you meant 'the runt of the LITTER', also 'he lived to a grand, OLD age'.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Your a good soul angel. Glad he lived a to a grand age. thanks Dawn.
angel

6 Years Ago

Currently, we have 11 cats; I had 3, and one is older, and lazy. We were planning to get him a kitte.. read more



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A beautiful poem Dawn and brought back many memories of many litters throughout our lives living in town and out on farms. Loved the imagery and the memories!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed it Richard, so nice it gave you some nice memories of your own from yonder years. T.. read more
This sounds like a tribute Dawn to a little pup, the runt of the litter, who survived against the odds with Linda and Bill who adored him. We had a kitten like that who survived against the odds. Heartwarming and sad at the same time.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thanks Chris
Reminds me of an unwanted kitten we acquired. Trust me to choose the damaged one; a kitten with one eye (the other eye completely missing, the eye socket closed, and furred over)...or Dusty, a little grey kitten with a deformed leg.
We took him to the vet, who recommended amputation, as this left, front leg was impeding him.
Once that leg was off, Dusty came into his own! He still limped when he was walking, but when he ran--a blur! You couldn't tell there was anything at all wrong with him!
He died at 17, which is a good old age.
I enjoyed your memorial tribute, Dawn.
I noticed two things.
I think you meant 'the runt of the LITTER', also 'he lived to a grand, OLD age'.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Your a good soul angel. Glad he lived a to a grand age. thanks Dawn.
angel

6 Years Ago

Currently, we have 11 cats; I had 3, and one is older, and lazy. We were planning to get him a kitte.. read more
Fred sounds like a happy pup indeed..such an endearing write ...well done..

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thankyou Fran, that was really kind of you to say.
my dear Dawn, you never ceases to impress me with your superb poetry.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Bless you sweetheart, you do make me smile. hugs. Dawn.
goldenscar__

6 Years Ago

.....:))))
Funny how nothing keeps a dog down.
Take it Fred outlived his brothers and sisters.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Onlyme

6 Years Ago

that is so true Paul. Dogs are outstanding creatures.

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Tags: dog, loved, 20, great, years, loyal, happy, content

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A Poem by Onlyme