Are we sheep?

Are we sheep?

A Story by Onlyme

Are we like sheep,
waiting to be herded,
and lead to the promised land?

But a few wild sheep, always
break free and run wild.

And do their own thing.

And is the promised land.

Actually what you make of it
here on earth. As no promised land
actually exist in reality or the afterlife?

Curious and pondering these questions.

© 2018 Onlyme


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Dear Dawn. We are surrounded by the sheep. Don't read, don't look where they are going and allow the media to control their thoughts. Few free-minds. I try to teach and show. The sheep become well trained and they stay on the path. Thank you for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote, I really despair for this new generation of youngsters. Bless you Coyote for understa.. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I do understand these thoughts. I worry for the kids and you are welcome Dawn.



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I broke free and ran, and still run today. It's in my nature, cadges aren't for this sheep.
I agree with your thought, the promised land is what you make it. It's right here if you want it to be.
I guess it's in your head isn't it?
The promised land, just might be, the promise of the freedom in one's own mind.
That's my opinion, at least.
My other opinion is that this is a wonderfully short poem. Like one of those tiny firecrackers that makes a really loud noise.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thanks Louis, your a true sweetheart, bless you. Dawn.
a black sheep no doubt,,,bah,bahh,bahhh

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

I would rather be a black sheep than a follower anyday.
 wordman

6 Years Ago

well,that's what i am
I smile while I read this. It reminds me of an alternative universe series, the Ring of Fires. If I were to try to explain, I would need to rewrite the entire series, and there were already multiple writers. Brillo, a ram, becomes a central figure.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Oh Jon, you made me lol.
Jon Roggie

6 Years Ago

Somebody has to be the jester!
Onlyme

6 Years Ago

:)............
Well, if the Lord is our shepherd, I guess that makes us sheep.Whoever doesn't want to be one of His sheep, just walk away! There are no tethers, no fences or cages.
I consider myself one of Jesus' sheep, and is that such a bad thing? Think about it
The important point is not that we are just like sheep, but that we have a wonderful Shepherd. That was David’s thought on Psalm 23: “The Lord is my shepherd.” It was a boast. “Look at who my shepherd is!"
As a shepherd himself, David knew that the quality of life for any sheep depends upon the kind of shepherd who takes care of it.
And Jesus, the Good Shepherd, is a great shepherd. He sacrifices for His sheep: He literally gave His life for us. He knows His sheep: He knows us each individually, intimately, and completely—and loves us anyway! He unites His sheep: To the Good Shepherd, race, sex, ethnicity and nationality are all unimportant. We are all His flock. He lives for His sheep: He died, but He rose again, and He will never abandon us.
As for the promised land, I certainly believe it exists. I will follow the Shepherd where he leads. Any who do so can never go wrong, for the Lord will never lead us astray.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Religion is used by businessmen at times to rake money and power from the masses. That is just part .. read more
angel

6 Years Ago

I realize that, but I know enough to reject the vainglorious preaching of the prosperity gospel, and.. read more
Onlyme

6 Years Ago

I agree with you angel, nothing wrong in believing in God at all. I just don't like the ones who pro.. read more
Dear Dawn. We are surrounded by the sheep. Don't read, don't look where they are going and allow the media to control their thoughts. Few free-minds. I try to teach and show. The sheep become well trained and they stay on the path. Thank you for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote, I really despair for this new generation of youngsters. Bless you Coyote for understa.. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I do understand these thoughts. I worry for the kids and you are welcome Dawn.

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Added on November 18, 2018
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