The gates of hell are Open.

The gates of hell are Open.

A Poem by Onlyme

The gates of hell are open
And out pops the devil himself.
Grinning and laughing out loud.
He comes to this world called earth above.
And has a good look around.
Thinking to himself.
Oh my, I am not needed here.
They are already fucked up already!
No need to cause wars and famines
and upset and pain.
Back home I go...
And in an instant,
a crater opens up
before him.

He jumps into the red fire pit.
That appears within it,
and then he is magical,
gone back to hell.

© 2018 Onlyme


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I never picture the devil as one with a pointy tale, or horns on his forehead. Well, maybe the horns, but with that you should have a calling card. Being said, look at the world, and you see acts of evil, but you still see glimmers of hope.


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thanks Jon, What can I say an slight optimist. At heart. Dawn.
Much truth in what you say Dawn There's so much messed up in this world, it's almost as though the devil himself would have a problem making it worse. Hope you are OK Dawn.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thanks Chris, And doing not to bad, ups and downs. Dealing with his cancer.Thanks for asking.Dawn.
Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Take care Dawn
I agree dear Dawn. Devil doesn't need to assist. Men had took down earth without help. Powerful and worthwhile words shared. I liked this one.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote.

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Added on November 7, 2018
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Tags: hell, gates, open, devistation, famine, hunger, war, suffering, planet

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Onlyme
Onlyme

United Kingdom



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A Poem by Onlyme