Bonfire Night
A Poem by Onlyme
Bonfire night is upon us all. Flicking flames glowing different shades of reds and oranges. Cracking and hissing wood burning bright.
People of all ages standing around this massive symbol of reminders of Guy
Fawkes and what he tried to
do a long time ago in history.
Effigies of all types of people are placed on the top of the fire before it's lit. Nowadays from famous people to anyone that takes their fancy. Are their object of desire to head this role.
Fireworks are let off And everyone eats and drinks and has a good time.
Watching this bonfire burn and the fireworks show. Then time for home. Then to bed
all tucked in. Snug as a bug all night long.
© 2018 Onlyme
Reviews
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Great imaging! I feel that it would flow better if you wrote "shades of red and orange" vs "shades of reds and oranges". Overall a very lovely poem
Posted 6 Years Ago
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sounds like a plan to me,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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6 Years Ago
Funny thing is Ron. Not been to one in a years. Hope your okay hon. Dawn.
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6 Years Ago
time to go then,i am fine,working to much
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6 Years Ago
Sounds like you need some chill time. Like in your latest poem.. To make you smile.
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6 Years Ago
lol,worked last two weekends and looks like tomorrow
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6 Years Ago
well you need to take time off. Get a glass of whiskey and chill.
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6 Years Ago
sounds good,bourbon
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6 Years Ago
yupe, pour yourself a glass. You deserve it.
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6 Years Ago
bourbon and coke or sprite,lay back in my recliner,
listen to some music
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6 Years Ago
Now that is it Ron. purrfect.
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6 Years Ago
sounds great,just need a few more things
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6 Years Ago
I am sure you will get them.
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6 Years Ago
of course. never doubt yourself.
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