We are all fucked Up

We are all fucked up,

in this f**k up world.

Your not the only one.

Who is fucked up?

We all have our own problems

and woes.

Let alone things that upset us and

give us sleepless nights after night.

But taking your s**t out on other

people does not help your cause.

All you do is push others way

and upset people.

Let alone you just get ignored.

Why don't you learn to open

up and trust and actually talk

normal?

And be more decent in general

and see others are just like you

and relate to you big time.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

wow love this dawn
this really really spoke to me with what i am going through at the moment with work issues and relationships at work
i cant go into detail about above but it just spoke to me jumped out at the page at me and stared me in the face kazam wow you are brilliant gal
love it
a colleague who bullield me at work 3 years ago who now has a great job and got away with bullying everyone at work after me, management never believed me, she tried to tell me once Julie, for f.... sake grow up and grow some b...s.!""
well i didnt did i and am still getting into strife at work years later with people bullying me and people that dont like me
so maybe i should of taken this womans advice i wont call her a woman she was a b...h but anyway
your poem spoke loud and clear.

[Onlyme]

hi Julie, glad this helped you and no problem, iam leaving both comments. More power to you Julie. hugs Dawn

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

good work dawn looking fwd to more of your stuff truly

[Onlyme]

ThanksJulie,truth is I just say what I feel from my heart and what I learnt the hear way in my ownlife. But thankyou Julie for appricating me and my writes. hugs Dawn

[Papaya]

yes, it's so true, we all are in some way less than perfect
but no one should be cast out for it or bullied

[Crowley]

I am a bit fucked up....lol. I try not to be but it just happens!!!! I see the world as you do in this one as I just got kicked in the balls tonight for being honest!!!

[Onlyme]

oh dear, that must have hurt? Hope your okay thought. What can I say. we are all fucked....

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

your poem really resonated with me today
like your stuff dawn sorry about long reply below you can delete if you like lol