Flaws & Being Human.

Flaws & Being Human.

A Poem by Onlyme

A humble heart is a good heart
who tends to get used a lot.
A greedy soul. Wants and never
feels full.

A sad person needs love and comfort.
An angry person is hurt and feels used
and abused. And feels no one listen to him
in general.

We are all but human and have our flaws.

It's accepting our flaws and not letting them rule
us. Or shapes us to be who we expect to
be from those downfalls.

We grow and learn and reach for new goals
as we mature.

And always will have some sort of flaw no
matter what.

But by accepting who you are both good and bad.

Is the secret to being more happier within yourself.

Or at least helps big time.

As you are not doubting yourself or criticising yourself
constantly. Within your own mind's eye.

Your accepting yourself for who you are. Human.

© 2018 Onlyme


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Lovely write on the human condition ;-}

Posted 6 Years Ago


Beautiful poem.,
Holds so much truth,
Your style in writing and playing with words are always so powerful..

Posted 6 Years Ago


This sounds like my version of Zen.
How can you understand the world around you if you don't understand yourself?
The second changes your view of the first.
I like your explanation.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thanks Jon, appricate your thoughts. Dawn.
Yes - to errr is a human trait. It is the accepting that we have made a mistake and in the correcting of that mistake that makes us a better person.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Exactly Kitty, well said.

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Onlyme
Onlyme

United Kingdom



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Dawn Dawn

A Poem by Onlyme