Chili Challenge

Chili Challenge

A Poem by Onlyme

Chili Challenge

He did the chili challenge
at the local diner.
Mouth full of food
eating as fast as he could.

Nearly choked himself
a few times.
Hot and sweaty face
had the shakes
and nearly passed out
another time.

Oh my god!

Why do people do these
daft food challenges?

I must admit.
I never watched
I just could not.


ps thanks Richard for the help.

© 2018 Onlyme


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Hey, Dawn! : )
What a cute little Free Verse piece you've treated us to about how the more offbeat and adventurous among us will do anything for a trophy or a thrill, even stuffing their faces with any and everything imaginable!
The one appealing part about this little pleaser of yours, besides the great writing and imagery dancing all through your words, is that I love a good hot bowl of Tex-Mex chili!
NOT, of course, to the degree your gobbling competitor did … LOL!

Really good stuff, Dawn!
I love it, and thanks for the honorable mention … big hugs, Lady-Poet! ⁓ Richard : D


psst!
"and nearly 'passed' out" : )

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thanks Richard, your a true Gentleman. bless you Dawn.
Richard🖌

6 Years Ago

Anytime, M'Lady! : )



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Haha, reminds me of that episode on Modern Family, when Cam takes on a similar food challenge at a Columbian restaurant to show Gloria how appreciative he is of her culture.

Very clever use of lines in your verses. This is indeed well etched out, Dawn.

Best,
M.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Glad you liked it Mallika. bless you Dawn.
Hey, Dawn! : )
What a cute little Free Verse piece you've treated us to about how the more offbeat and adventurous among us will do anything for a trophy or a thrill, even stuffing their faces with any and everything imaginable!
The one appealing part about this little pleaser of yours, besides the great writing and imagery dancing all through your words, is that I love a good hot bowl of Tex-Mex chili!
NOT, of course, to the degree your gobbling competitor did … LOL!

Really good stuff, Dawn!
I love it, and thanks for the honorable mention … big hugs, Lady-Poet! ⁓ Richard : D


psst!
"and nearly 'passed' out" : )

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thanks Richard, your a true Gentleman. bless you Dawn.
Richard🖌

6 Years Ago

Anytime, M'Lady! : )
Not among my favorite competitions; rather disgusting to watch.
Intriguing piece, Dawn.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

I must admit Jimmy never understand this type of competition. cheers Dawn.
it seems there are more than enough people around willing to do whatever
All the best to them
Dave

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

That is a worrying thought Dave, to do whatever.. wow. cheers Dawn.

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Added on September 13, 2018
Last Updated on September 14, 2018
Tags: chillie, challenge

Author

Onlyme
Onlyme

United Kingdom



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Dawn Dawn

A Poem by Onlyme