Hey, Dawn! : )
What a cute little Free Verse piece you've treated us to about how the more offbeat and adventurous among us will do anything for a trophy or a thrill, even stuffing their faces with any and everything imaginable!
The one appealing part about this little pleaser of yours, besides the great writing and imagery dancing all through your words, is that I love a good hot bowl of Tex-Mex chili!
NOT, of course, to the degree your gobbling competitor did … LOL!
Really good stuff, Dawn!
I love it, and thanks for the honorable mention … big hugs, Lady-Poet! ⁓ Richard : D
psst!
"and nearly 'passed' out" : )
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thanks Richard, your a true Gentleman. bless you Dawn.
Haha, reminds me of that episode on Modern Family, when Cam takes on a similar food challenge at a Columbian restaurant to show Gloria how appreciative he is of her culture.
Very clever use of lines in your verses. This is indeed well etched out, Dawn.
Hey, Dawn! : )
What a cute little Free Verse piece you've treated us to about how the more offbeat and adventurous among us will do anything for a trophy or a thrill, even stuffing their faces with any and everything imaginable!
The one appealing part about this little pleaser of yours, besides the great writing and imagery dancing all through your words, is that I love a good hot bowl of Tex-Mex chili!
NOT, of course, to the degree your gobbling competitor did … LOL!
Really good stuff, Dawn!
I love it, and thanks for the honorable mention … big hugs, Lady-Poet! ⁓ Richard : D
psst!
"and nearly 'passed' out" : )
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thanks Richard, your a true Gentleman. bless you Dawn.