Old Charlie & Alice.

Old Charlie & Alice.

A Poem by Onlyme

Old Charlie goes out every day after
9.30am so he can use his free pass
on the bus.

Goes to the nearest bookies.
Places a few bets on 2 horses
and 2 dogs for the day.

Win or lose that is his routine.

Alice his wife. Cleans the house all
day. Goes shopping. At 5 pm

Charlie comes home. Dinner on a table.

Then afterwards. Both do dishes and clean
up. Charlie makes cups of tea
and brings biscuits in.

In front of a television. For the night the
pair.

Weekends. Local pub. Saturday night.
Bingo and a few pints. And  a vodka and
coca for Alice his wife.

Sunday. Church. Then Sunday dinner with
all the trimmings. Meat, vegetables and
gravy roast potatoes.

The typical life of an old couple with
no kids or grandkids.

© 2018 Onlyme


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On my. That is so different from my household which is full of grandchildren and their friends. We have to escape for a bit of peace and quiet. The thought of cleaning the house all day, I think I'd shoot myself. There would be more excitement living in an old people's home. Thank you Dawn for making me appreciate what I've got. It may be hard work but it is rewarding.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Your house sounds fun Chris, a bit like my Aunties. House is always loud and proud. I be worn out my.. read more
Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Give me loud and proud. Keeps us young :))
Onlyme

6 Years Ago

exactly Chris. my mother in law you to say that. And she didn't act 76 her real age. As she was youn.. read more



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a rather sad poem, makes me think & wonder if there are many people who live like this. maybe poor people.

charlie & alice need more excitement in their life - just to keep their blood circulating with more fervour !!

however, people do a have a choice in the lifestyle they choose for themselves.

Posted 6 Years Ago


they sound completely content

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Exactly wordmans I do agree.
 wordman

6 Years Ago

you`re welcome
As long as they're reasonably content, I guess.
Nicely captured, Dawn!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

thanks Jimmy.
some people love routine and doing anything different can cause a lot of unrest. It's too bad though because there is just so much more to life that can be enjoyed. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

I agree Caolynn but it seems to make some people happy having that little routine in life.
On my. That is so different from my household which is full of grandchildren and their friends. We have to escape for a bit of peace and quiet. The thought of cleaning the house all day, I think I'd shoot myself. There would be more excitement living in an old people's home. Thank you Dawn for making me appreciate what I've got. It may be hard work but it is rewarding.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Your house sounds fun Chris, a bit like my Aunties. House is always loud and proud. I be worn out my.. read more
Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Give me loud and proud. Keeps us young :))
Onlyme

6 Years Ago

exactly Chris. my mother in law you to say that. And she didn't act 76 her real age. As she was youn.. read more
Sounds idyllic..actually it sounds a bit like me and my missus..... Where's that CCTV .... Neville

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

lol I think it's lovely. Dawn
Neville

6 Years Ago

......... :)

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