Common Sense

Common Sense

A Story by Onlyme

No common sense in this
world its gone for good.

Riding a bike with headphones
on and music blasting away
on a busy road.

Driving on the wrong side of busy
a road in a car oblivious to the
fact they could kill someone.

Jaywalking across
busy roads not looking
at all just coming straight
out.

I could go on people are nuts.

Driving down a street with
kids playing like your on
a race track going full speed.

Blocking parking bays
instead of using them.

I am frustrated at all
this bullshit.

© 2018 Onlyme


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The Fall of Adam. Or the descent of man. Every which way you look at, the decadence and rut in which we are going is hard to ignore. I laud the way you've brought out the seemingly innocuous acts of the everyday as crucial missteps in our evolution- if at all there is one.

Jaywalking, mindless dependence on our gadgets, we are no better than the living dead are we?

Dawn, you live up to your moniker. Showing light of the day.

A thought-provoking write.

Best,
M.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on September 13, 2018
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Author

Onlyme
Onlyme

United Kingdom



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