being tested

being tested

A Story by Onlyme

Feeling what is the point of late
going on at times in my mind and
heart.
Constantly tired and stressed
all the travelling back and forth
burnt out to be honest with the
hospital and stuff.


Know it's far from fun for him too.
Life really kicks you where it hurts.

no family help as they ill also.

oh the joys of living...

really is hard everyday of late.
never seems to see a rainbow.

© 2018 Onlyme


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"oh the joys of living..." the cynicism is heart breaking Dawn ;(( i am so sorry for the trials endured ..we all have limits of resolve .. i guess hitting them is a blessing in disguise though .. as we realize our strength and capabilities are tapped out and we turn to the Highest Power ... certainly this is a confessional poem and i am sending up my prayers for you and those surrounding this circumstance ... it is not fair, fun or anything but lousy ... but we do make it somehow .. every time .. and each time makes the next time less imposing says i! God bless you big big!!!
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


So sorry you're going through rough times. It's hard to see the good things in life in such circumstances. Keep up writing and expressing your feelings. Hope everything works out for the best.

Posted 6 Years Ago


sorry that you are going thru hell here on earth at the moment dawn
I dont know the circumstances and wont pry but maybe would be facebook friends
i find facebook friends an easy way to communicate as well as this
what da ya say?
anyway i like your work keep writing its obviously a good release for pent up tensions emotions we all have i for one am lost when i dont write my feelings down it clears my head
x

Posted 6 Years Ago


funny how you're surrounded by people that you feel so alone

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

that is the worse type of lonliness wordsman. surrounded by people but feeling it more. As you feel .. read more
 wordman

6 Years Ago

well, i can relate to you

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Added on September 6, 2018
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Onlyme
Onlyme

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