fear of fear....
A Poem by
Onlyme
Fearing the unknown
letting it control you
as it manifests itself
more inside your heart
mind and body.
It's ruling you
ever thought
and decision
you make.
Making you more
paralyzed with every
moment.
Even in your dreams
If you get any sleep...
He is showing himself
and casting a dark
shadow over you.
You are living in fear
of fear itself...
© 2018 Onlyme
Reviews
That's a very pertinent read. And you are right. Most times, its not fear. Its the fear of fear that burns inside. Good one.
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you Gaurav, for your thoughts. hugs Dawn.
Dawn - you are very perceptive. If we allow fear to overwhelm us we become
stagnant and are incapable of doing anything.
Thank you for your thoughtful poetry. - Dave
Posted 6 Years Ago
Dawn - you are very perceptive. If we allow fear to overwhelm us we become
stagnant and are incapable of doing anything.
Thank you for your thoughtful poetry. - Dave
Wonderful poem
Making you paralyzed with every moment
Loved this line
Posted 6 Years Ago
Wonderful poem
Making you paralyzed with every moment
Loved this line
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you Ranfer, Hugs Dawn.
Fear can make us cannot see the light of hope. I liked the honest and direct words and thoughts. Thank you dawn for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 6 Years Ago
Fear can make us cannot see the light of hope. I liked the honest and direct words and thoughts. Thank you dawn for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you Coyote
6 Years Ago
You are welcome Dawn.
So very true my friend. This is a well-written and thought out poem. Insightful and analytical lines. Verses are minimalist but impactful. Fear is a cruel taskmaster and you have made this point excellently Dawn. Brava.
Posted 6 Years Ago
So very true my friend. This is a well-written and thought out poem. Insightful and analytical lines. Verses are minimalist but impactful. Fear is a cruel taskmaster and you have made this point excellently Dawn. Brava.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you Annette for your wisdom and kindness. hugs Dawn.
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