The power of Rain

The power of Rain

A Poem by Onlyme


The power of raindrops
the magic does produce
the affect of soothing rages
inside our hurting souls

the lifting of our spirit
and giving our hearts
feelings of being comforted
by touches of Gods gentle
hands upon our skin
as it pours
from the heavenly sky.

It's cleaning the earth
and lifting all the impurities
and dirty and grim from the atmosphere
It's  helping growth and nurture
the soil we use to grow food.

It's giving us a steady supply
of drinking water to
survive on.

It helps us bathe and wash
our clothing.

Rain is our saviour and salvation
it helps us survive.

Give thanks as I do.

© 2018 Onlyme


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LOVE! LOVE! LOVE! This is exactly how rain makes me feel . . . too bad we never get rain anymore in central California! I miss rain! Your poem makes me long for it in a bad way. I love how you bring in all the ways rain refreshes -- from human's grinding angst to nature's dusty leaves. Excellent imagination to make this a wide-seeking message (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


A nice piece
Our area, a rainforest, has had one minor rainfall in app 60 days.
The forests are bone dry, we desperately need rain but I'd like it better if it just rained at night
Go get wet!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thank you Dave, fingers crossed it rain real soon. So the forests get some decent soaking time in. b.. read more
I love a rainy day, and this is a way of looking at rain in its purest form. I am finishing up a rain poem of my own, but it's not as healing as yours. Beautiful words, thank you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thank you Peter, for your lovely thoughts, I will check yours out also. hugs Dawn.
There's a book where rain infects people and makes them kill other people. The book is by Richard Laymon. But, don't read Laymon because he kinda sucks.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thanks CLR9, for your thoughts, best wishes Dawn.
I admire rains too, I find them soothing, it not only provides us with water but provides a healing effect to those who are fond of them. Very refreshing! Thank you so much for writing this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thank you Najam, for your lovely thoughts. best wishes Dawn.
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You are most welcome. Good luck! :)

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Added on August 26, 2018
Last Updated on August 26, 2018
Tags: power, rain, magical, healing, soothing, comforting

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Onlyme
Onlyme

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A Poem by Onlyme



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