Yum Yum

Yum Yum

A Poem by Onlyme

Miss Marshmallow she loves Mr Twix
but he fancied  Miss Bounty
And she loved Miss Mars
oh, what a right trio.

Mr lion he got Miss After Eight
in the club by showing her his
curly wurly and they had a flake
and a Wispa for children.

I also heard Terry's Chocolate Orange
dated Opal Mints
and went on a picnic in the local park.
Via a double deck bus ride.


© 2018 Onlyme


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novel and nicely done, a little bit of high calorie fun

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Cheers Dave. 😊
and mr mars bar went to the milky way where he met the 3 musketeers
they found the sweet cadbury bar,mr mars went inside and created the hershey bar
from that came zagnut and moonpie they live happily in the sky

loved your silly write

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thank you Ron. 😜
 wordman

6 Years Ago

yes mam ,,,,,,,,,,,
And their love lighted the Galaxy and the Aero- bubbled and doubles their love for eachother ... well written very original🌹

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thank you Thoughts In Time, 😉
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

PLeasure🌹
Nooo, Dawn, not you too! Whadidya do with my name there in the title?!? Loool jk, I enjoyed reading this piece. Not really a fan of sweet things but now makes me want to eat one and it's wayy past midnight...! 😛
Made me smile :))

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Years Ago

So dentists are supposed to be ugly in US? :P
Onlyme

6 Years Ago

OH god in Uk. some are scary.
Dr. YumnaKay

6 Years Ago

Haha I don't doubt that ;) I have to feign being scary to some here too 😜
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Hahaha....a Yum Yum delighting poem!! And the trio is so right ;)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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6 Years Ago

I knew! Am your hero so!😊
 wordman

6 Years Ago

you are my hero
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6 Years Ago

👊 yay!....

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Added on August 25, 2018
Last Updated on August 25, 2018
Tags: sweets, candy, chocolate, fun, humour

Author

Onlyme
Onlyme

United Kingdom



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Dawn Dawn

A Poem by Onlyme



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