Life.... Kicks A*s But Also Can Be Wonderful & Great..

Life.... Kicks A*s But Also Can Be Wonderful & Great..

A Poem by Onlyme

Well the Devil has entered the house
and I will not let him win
Yes at times
he gets to us
and really makes us suffer
and feel he is winning.

But with love, faith, hope
and encouragement
from
others who do care.

And time.
Is all we can do is
wait and see What will be
will be.

If good things are to happen
that is wonderful and great.
If bad?
I will have to
deal with the best I can.


Life is strange and tragic
at times. But also wonderful
and great other times.

We all only have one chance
to live. So grasp it with both
hands and hold tight
and simply enjoy.

© 2018 Onlyme


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Nicely crafted chant of acceptance. Life is so much easier when we finally stop fighting against things that happen & just use them as stepping stones to better understanding. Your poem shows life in a balanced way with emphasis on how to capture the joyful parts (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


I must agree with your inspiring poem and Coyote’s awesome review and hope we all hang on to life and enjoy it while we can. It is real, it is here and it is now. Love the power of your first two lines- never let the Devil win. Great poem, memorable and well-written dear Dee.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I agree Dee.
"We all only have one chance
to live. So grasp it with both
hands and hold tight
and simply enjoy"
The above lines, words to live by. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.

Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote you are always so nice to me. Bless you Dee
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I appreciate you too and you are welcome my friend.
Dee - this is a powerful message. You're right, when the going is smooth we must enjoy the ride. When it is rough and tumble we must hold on with both hands, dig in with our knees and heels and refuse to be thrown - ride it out.
Take care - Dave

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thank you Dave, you always give me hope and good advice. Bless you.
Dave

6 Years Ago

HEY!!! That's what I'm here for! And thank you for the blessing.
Take care - Dave
You can only control the way you respond to what happens in life. Stuff happens.
I like the message, as well as the words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

So true Jon. Thanks for your thoughts.
When you appreciate life do it with your eyes open.So much to see you may never experience again.Nice to be reminded this life is so precious

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on August 5, 2018
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