Where has communication gone......

Where has communication gone......

A Poem by Onlyme

Do we
really talk
to each other?
or
is it just noise?

hello
goodbye
how are you?
what is for dinner?
want a cup of tea?
see you later......

not actually
caring at all

fleeting moments
of small talk

even in our
own homes
with our own
families
and close friends

so much suffering
and poetry self-harm
drug abuse
sex abuse
alcohol
the list is
long on
self-destruct

writing seems
to be
our escape
from suffering
and pain
or religion
or said above
to cope
or even far
worse death

why can
we not
properly
be honest
with each other
anymore in life?

Why do
we pretend
with fake chat
and
small talk
when
someone close
is hurting?

© 2018 Onlyme


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Nicely done and said rightly. I think, sometimes it is easier to peruse the surface than to get into the underneath. But we must try. People are often shocked about my willingness to open up. I learned, painfully so, that hiding one's truth can be very harmful, and keep a person from being the best person one can be.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thankyou, Lyn



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So true
So so true
I hope you are well though and happy genuine qn can open up to more if the other person trusts the asker alas if they don’t or don’t have a bond the asked won’t open up good thoughts thank you

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

True Julie, thankyou for your thoughts.
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Nice Dee. Once again you have tackled a very current topic. One which I think we all are guilty of. Good prose, good work. keep it up. Most enjoyable.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thanks, M@
Nicely done and said rightly. I think, sometimes it is easier to peruse the surface than to get into the underneath. But we must try. People are often shocked about my willingness to open up. I learned, painfully so, that hiding one's truth can be very harmful, and keep a person from being the best person one can be.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thankyou, Lyn
:( why indeed :( i think we get better at it when the business of life slows down a bit ... the importance of things take on a deeper meaning ... if we let it ;)
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

I do agree with you on that Einstein.
Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

;) .........................
We are secrets to each other
Each one's life a novel
No-one else has read
Even joined in bonds of love
We're linked to one another
By such slender threads

Neal Peart...Rush....Entre Nous
Love your writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Very wise words and so true Thank you Misterr Remeat.
just send a text,the new norm

Posted 6 Years Ago


Onlyme

6 Years Ago

True, wordman.
 wordman

6 Years Ago

you`re welcome

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Added on July 26, 2018
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Tags: talking, communication, caring, hearing, listening

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