Light........shines...........bright

sometimes I just come on here

as I feel so dark

and someone

comes along

and shines

the light bright

in your direction

and the sun

instantly

is turned on

and the darkness

disappears and

the clouds go

and you

feel comfort

and love

as others

relate

and feel

the same

as you

so the light

glows

and

radiates

everywhere

and

smiles

appear ahead

Reviews

[sette]

very poignant words... there is light in every tunnel as the saying goes all we have to do is to see the light and try to find the essence or purpose in life.,. this poem displays positive thoughts and having that radiance in one's life makes it worth living for

[ZeeArsonist]

As I was reading these lines I felt the sun setting on my mind. A mind busy from shuffling the way a writer's thoughts do. I closed my eyes to the soft kaleidoscope of shapes against the backs of my eyelids. I smiled when I recognized a song visiting me, you know the way nostalgic songs just show up . "There is a crack in everything. That's how the light gets in." Leonard Cohen- Anthem Thank you for sharing this poem with me. For helping me remember to appreciate everything as it is, gently.

[Crowley]

It is the best feeling and it really can change a day and an attitude. You have done that here for sure. Great job!!

[Dave Brown]

Yes, keep that smile going
the alternative is much less appealing

[Kelly Scheppers]

This is the best venue online! It very much feels like home to me. All you need to do is find your own circle of friends and keep the drama at bay. Many blessings, Dee.

[Onlyme]

Thanks Kelly.