Gift of Life....

Gift of Life....

A Poem by Onlyme

We take breathing
as instinct and a matter of fact
until the day comes or something
happens to you
when you just can not
breathe without help
like someone with asthma or
other breathing problems
I for one can relate and
understand that one.
As I myself have asthma and
in hot weather or stress filled
situations it flares up and to
fill your lungs with air is hard
and to be left gasping for such
said air
is one of the worse feelings to
happen to anyone
It's like life is being sucked from your
chest as it gets tighter
and you're laboured
and heavy. And every tiny
breathe is keeping you alive
So thank you
for the aids of inhalers and
medication that assists
people like me to breathe
ones more.
For one
would be gone
So modern medicine cheers
to you.

© 2018 Onlyme


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Thank you for making this affliction so real to us that have been blessed not to have known it. For making so many aware of how much easier peoples lives have been made better through the innumerable miracles of medicine.

Take care - Dave

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thanks Dave.
Dave

6 Years Ago

You are most welcome.
its amazing we never care of our self sometimes and some live on medicines but we should always be happy what we have achieved . we never care and it later haunts and nd we take help of others. its awesome dee .thumbs up

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Cheers Ellie.
Is is a good poem that tells us that we take things for granted. Man cannot Reconize the blessedness of life every day. But it's a Thing we should do! Thanks for a poem to remind us this wonderful gift we have! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

thanks Sarah.
Thank you for sharing this honest sketch (((HUGS))) xx

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thanks Richard

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Added on July 20, 2018
Last Updated on July 20, 2018
Tags: breath, breathe, air

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Onlyme
Onlyme

United Kingdom



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A Poem by Onlyme