walking in the field of pleasure

walking in the field of pleasure

A Poem by Onlyme

MIdnight starry night
cool breeze on my skin

fields of wheat
during
the day
calm  filled
serenity evenings

just the gentle rustle
of the wheat
heard from the blowing breeze

a bird flies past
an owl twitters
a mouse scurries
between them
wheat shafts

I feel whole again
walking in the fields of pleasure
after dark

when no other human
is around
just me and mother nature
as one

in perfect harmony
together as one soul
mother and me.

© 2018 Onlyme


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I could feel the shafts of wheat brushing against my skin as I walk through your beautiful field. Your writing is very descriptive. Thank you for sharing.
Take care - Dave

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is terrific. so peaceful, serene and calming. i felt like i was there. made me take a deep breath and relax. thanks for sharing ... :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Cheers Peter, made my day, knowing someone felt good with this one. Since I have done so many of lat.. read more

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Added on July 20, 2018
Last Updated on July 20, 2018
Tags: calm, peace, serenity, nature, one, wheat.

Author

Onlyme
Onlyme

United Kingdom



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Dawn Dawn

A Poem by Onlyme