I Care....

I hear you weep

I want to comfort you

it hurts my heart

to see you so distressed

Let me take your woes

and make your load

lighter

and maybe

even

go away

completely

if I could

Let me

Show you

I really care

about you

Please let me

help

in some

way

even if it's just

a hug and

then I go.

But call me

Anytime!

Reviews

[M@]

Hi Dee - Really enjoyed this one. Simple in design and language, but you can see how so much thought went into the construction of it. And I am a believer in hugs so I feel that too.

[moog-drika]

I loved how you structured the piece with so simplicity and care. Makes it not only easy to read but also highlight the concern that you carry for the one you love.

[light and ashes]

I can feel your sincerity and loving concern you have for others in this.

[kianatahleigh]

This is a lovely, I love how it says you got a friend in me in such a moving way.