Ride The Lightening.......

Ride The Lightening.......

A Poem by Onlyme

Ride the lightning.....
they shouted...

shouting even louder at me
encouraging me......... more to do just that...


Get on........when you hear it
cracking and starting up

But why?
It  makes you feel alive
But will it not kill me... I said.
No, don't be silly.

It lightening.
It's god work...

So next crack..... was coming
I got on.

And... yes
I was dead...

Serve me right
for listening to such fools.
And believing all I hear and was told...

© 2018 Onlyme


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Oh yeah, I'd rather be the naïve one though, life seems sweeter when we are the fool. It's only when our eyes are opened and we see how deceptive people are that we get struck. Shame that...or it could be that they believed you could do anything you set your mind to, I'd like to think of it that way.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Corset

6 Years Ago

In that case I'd rather not see it coming personally, a flash bang would be a blessing since we all .. read more
Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Yeah I get that. And relate to that. Instant and just happens. Like going to bed at night and not wa.. read more
Corset

6 Years Ago

yeah, that'd be a nice way to go



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ride on with what life has to offer

Posted 6 Years Ago


Oh yeah, I'd rather be the naïve one though, life seems sweeter when we are the fool. It's only when our eyes are opened and we see how deceptive people are that we get struck. Shame that...or it could be that they believed you could do anything you set your mind to, I'd like to think of it that way.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Corset

6 Years Ago

In that case I'd rather not see it coming personally, a flash bang would be a blessing since we all .. read more
Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Yeah I get that. And relate to that. Instant and just happens. Like going to bed at night and not wa.. read more
Corset

6 Years Ago

yeah, that'd be a nice way to go

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Added on July 15, 2018
Last Updated on July 15, 2018
Tags: Stupid, Daft, false, Lies

Author

Onlyme
Onlyme

United Kingdom



Writing
Dawn Dawn

A Poem by Onlyme