I walk.....

I walk.....

A Poem by Onlyme

I walk in the darkness
I feel for the light
I see nothing
I hear nothing
I touch nothing
I hope for something
I wish for anything
I want to be happy
but is this real

© 2018 Onlyme


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unique in its own special way... N

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Cheers Neville.
Neville

6 Years Ago

my pleasure..
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Can relate. Very nice piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thank you R.S. for your kind thoughts.
Short, succinct, and powerful imagery. Great piece!

-Derekv

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Walking in the darkness is better than walking in the light....at least we'll be scared of the darkness only not of the harmful ahead as we can't see anything...and that might help conquer the situation!!
Tis a good short read Dee, thanks for sharing and obviously Almighty's grace be upon you😊!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Onlyme

6 Years Ago

thanks Tahsin.
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6 Years Ago

😘😙😚....😊

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Added on July 14, 2018
Last Updated on July 14, 2018
Tags: questions, feelings, answers

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Onlyme
Onlyme

United Kingdom



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A Poem by Onlyme