Time ticking.......

Held within my right hand

                                  is hope

held in my left

                 is the faith

holding both

               high above my head

I pray

      for a light to shine on them

     from above

Asking

          for both

Only time

will tell

           and a twist of fate

the answer

until then waiting.........

                                     Time  nervously ticking

Reviews

[Riddhi]

I can understand how you felt while writing this..You know I feel that with your every writing you are improving so much as a writer..I remember your first writing here where I said you that why don't you put under story instead of poem but today you write poems so well.The way you said about hope and faith was worth appreciating...Everything will become fine...Hold onto both....

[M@]

Wow that is awesome Dee. Really enjoyed the subtlety and concise nature of a big and brave topic such as hope and faith. Hold onto both. Well written.

[Onlyme]

Thanks M@ appricate that a lot. hugs.

[M@]

Use both to fabricate your life