Lighten Up, Folks. It's a poem..

We live in a world. Where I say one thing

and you say another

and then the bunch, gloves go on.

OH, my this world is a blast....never ever a dull moment.

It's like setting off a grenade inside a Nun's house.

All hell breaks loose.

Lighten up, folks. Its a poem for f**k sake!

Reviews

[Neville]

There are many sides to poetry but the point you make here is valid.. mind you some folk take everything too seriously.... Neville

[Onlyme]

I agree Neville, life is short in general. And we all got to pull together, instead of always for and against. Like the majority of the public seem to do with each other. Battles royal.

[Neville]

absolutely..........N

[Lyn Anderson]

Rant on I say. Do what you gotta do to stay sane.
I might put an apostrophe with Nun's just to remain consistent with the rest of the poem

[Onlyme]

Thank Lyn. and also for the help. wink.

[Chris Shaw]

It's like setting off a grenade inside a Nun's house,
All hell breaks loose.

That dear Dee made me laugh. Probably most un pc, but it still made me laugh.

Chris

[Onlyme]

Glad I made you laugh Chris. As I badly need to laugh today. Been feeling so stressed out and crying nearly all the time now. Oh the joys of life...

[Chris Shaw]

Difficult times for you. One day at a time. Don't think too far ahead.

[Onlyme]

I went a bit nuts today with poems. But thanks for being understand Chris.. Had MRI yesterday. And Monday another x ray.. and so on..So I went crazy on here..

[Chris Shaw]

Good to keep your mind occupied :))

[Onlyme]

I agree, but when mad. And everyone saw it.. Oh well. Iam me.

[Chris Shaw]

A little rant every now and again...............I won't begrudge you that

[Onlyme]

Lol cheers Chris hugs.

[barleygirl]

Maybe you need to toughen up! *wink! wink!* When you write something controversial, ya gotta expect to get splash-back! Don't put this on others. If you can't handle the heat, stay out of the kitchen (which is why I rarely write anything controversial!) Have fun with this! Getting a wide variety of feedback is a good thing. It helps us see how our messages come across! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Gee]

Tut, tut, controversial, not me your honour :)

[Onlyme]

LOL, Margie you made me laugh. And so true. Could not help myself. My wicked sense of humour came out on that one. What can I say..

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Is it the sex one? Or the political one? Either way your rounding the bend behind Neville for top writer today...go Dee go!

[Onlyme]

LOL, need that Queenie.. a good laugh. Sorry so stressed out. Had to do some crazy poems. To feel better inside.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Ps. No offense to Nev...he is a great writer too...but sometimes A woman just needs to be on top....Sorry Nev( but I don't think he'll disagree~wink)

[Onlyme]

ON top. who that sounds fun.. lol