Rain & Naked

Sanding naked

in the rain

in my garden

solitude

and private.

Feeling the gentle

pitter patter of

 light raindrops

they fall onto me

 intimate skin.

I come alive

with  sensations

it does bring.

Feelings of euphoria

and

simply pleasures

felt.

Reviews

[Chris]

Saw Dave's comment... were they askew and their curtains awe-bunched up?

Teasings aside - sometimes in the "heat" of ...life... we NEED that cleansing FEEL - like God's tears cooling and clearing a soul. In older days before the now "worries" of kiddie porn - toddlers would gleefully run "bare" to hoses held spraying from parents' hands. Even adults still haven't fully outgrown a Slip-n-Slide".

[Onlyme]

Thanks Chris for your thoughts.

[Coyote Poetry]

Standing nude in the rain. I hope you have a fence or you shall make the neighbor smile. Thank you Dee for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Onlyme]

I actually wish I could do this in the actual rain just to experience the euphoria of the drops on skin all over. But I have nosey neighbors so no. can not do but just dream sighs.

[Coyote Poetry]

You would make the neighbor smile would be fun.

[Onlyme]

Neighbours smile Coyote, police, newsworthiness flash lights i phones. I be on national news and then in local mental hospital for being an exhibitionist. Plus i would knocking out a couple of eyes with my b***s.. lol.

[LazerRays]

I think this captures innocent happiness at it's finest! You are so talented At getting people 'in' your poem. I could feel the raindrops and hear your laughter.
Love,
Sarah

[Onlyme]

Sarah, you made my day. Bless you hugs. Dee

[Ally Ann]

This poem gives off a sense of freedom and tranquility that I love. I have always felt connected with the rain, and sometimes we need it in order to feel as if our worries are washed away. Thanks for sharing this poem!

[Onlyme]

Thankyou, Ally Ann, I do agree freedom and bliss rolled into one.

[Dave Brown]

shock and awe
and the neighbours?

[Onlyme]

lol. its a poem.