My modern day prayer
A Poem by
Onlyme
You are my sunshine
when it is raining.
You are my heart
when it is not mine,
but yours.
You are my everything.
My world.
I believe in.
I also know, we are far from
a perfect couple.
you and I.
But, you make my life.
So complete.
You lift me up when
I am down.
I really
want you
to
be so.
very contented,
happy
and health.
No matter what!
Please God,
make
my soul mates
pain go away.
And to just make him.
Smile, healthy and happy
yet once more, please.
Why simply
because
he is
a good man
and I love him
so much!
And also
because
I can
not bear
to see
him
in so much pain.
I know life is short
God,
I ask this one
favour for him.
Just make him
smile
and pain-free!
I just wish!
I COULD BUT I CAN NOT! So this gift
I beg
from you.
I hope you hear
my modern day
prayer love D.
And do this for him
and others in this
world suffering
take it all away
and make them
whole again
on earth.
Amen
© 2018 Onlyme
Featured Review
Great poem! As a Christian, I enjoyed the spiritual aspect. Beautiful imagery, the grief and frustration behind it was certainly palpable. It can be heartbreaking to watch a loved one in pain, knowing that there is nothing you can do to help them.
Keep up the great work!
-Derekv
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you,DerekV we all need help in this world and asking costs nothing for anyone to ask. 😊
6 Years Ago
You're welcome :)
6 Years Ago
Thanks again for your thoughts.😊
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A simple prayer, from the heart to a very deserving person. Put another request in that 'prayer basket'
Posted 6 Years Ago
A simple prayer, from the heart to a very deserving person. Put another request in that 'prayer basket'
Great poem! As a Christian, I enjoyed the spiritual aspect. Beautiful imagery, the grief and frustration behind it was certainly palpable. It can be heartbreaking to watch a loved one in pain, knowing that there is nothing you can do to help them.
Keep up the great work!
-Derekv
Posted 6 Years Ago
Great poem! As a Christian, I enjoyed the spiritual aspect. Beautiful imagery, the grief and frustration behind it was certainly palpable. It can be heartbreaking to watch a loved one in pain, knowing that there is nothing you can do to help them.
Keep up the great work!
-Derekv
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you,DerekV we all need help in this world and asking costs nothing for anyone to ask. 😊
6 Years Ago
You're welcome :)
6 Years Ago
Thanks again for your thoughts.😊