We don't  talking anymore!

We don't talking anymore!

A Poem by Onlyme

I feel,  we stopped communicating
and really do not talk to each other
anymore!
I feel alone
and abandoned
as well a deserted
by you.
I understand
you are filled
with worry,
anxiety and dread
due to
not being very well.
But neither
am l
very well
also.
I am drowning in misery
and uncertainty
and losing hope
of tomorrow.
Not being good news.
I fear for you.
I fear for myself.
I fear for us both.
We are sinking
and drift and
going our
separate ways.
I wish!
I want!
I need!
Us to be
whole again.
Together as one.
Do not let our illness
pull our part.
Do not let the fear
rule you and control me.
Do not let it command
you and in addition as
me.  destroy us as
well.
Please open up and
communicate and
simply talk
to me!
No wonder we
are falling apart!

© 2018 Onlyme


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The old saying 'a problem shared is a problem halved' may have been based on scientific fact, according to a new study. Researchers have proved that the best way to beat stress is to share your feelings - and sharing with someone in the same situation yields the best results. This is because sharing a threatening situation with a person in a similar emotional state 'buffers individuals from experiencing the heightened levels of stress that typically accompany threat'! Your poetic write highlights the need for such sharing and the need to resolve and face these issues together! Goo d piece of writing … :-)

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Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thanks Phill, for your insightful and very intersting view and thoughts. And what you said is so ver.. read more



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Oh boy I live this everyday and to read this made it become more a reality.. Thank you for sharing

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Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Neverlose faith and hope and talk. thinking of you both, you are not alone.
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Its so hard to communicate sometimes when we are so lost in ourselves. Too many times relationships get to the point where we stop loving (verb) each other....we forget, we fear, we lose.

I enjoyed your writing though it made me sad as I can relate only too well.....T

Posted 6 Years Ago


Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thank you T, and for your thoughts.
Just talking helps so much..... I feel sometimes we all need is someone to speak... in this age when world is at our finger tips...we seem to be getting lost in our own world of darkness easily....

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Insightful review Arda. Bless you and so very true. What you said. Feeling your own darkness makes i.. read more
Ardra

6 Years Ago

Sometimes it just takes someone with a good heart and tons of patience to hear us out ... that's wh.. read more
Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Exactlay. Well said. :)
The old saying 'a problem shared is a problem halved' may have been based on scientific fact, according to a new study. Researchers have proved that the best way to beat stress is to share your feelings - and sharing with someone in the same situation yields the best results. This is because sharing a threatening situation with a person in a similar emotional state 'buffers individuals from experiencing the heightened levels of stress that typically accompany threat'! Your poetic write highlights the need for such sharing and the need to resolve and face these issues together! Goo d piece of writing … :-)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thanks Phill, for your insightful and very intersting view and thoughts. And what you said is so ver.. read more

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Added on July 1, 2018
Last Updated on July 1, 2018
Tags: communication, talking, expressing oneself. opening up, speaking, silence, broken.

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Onlyme

United Kingdom



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