Soppy but true

I long for

the closeness

and intimate

of lying with

you and resting

my ear against

your chest

and listening

to the captivating

throbbing of your

heartbeat

resonating inside

me by virtue

of my hearing.

I am in awe

and truly devoted

in love with only

you.

Reviews

[splattercore]

If you long for those days, then they’re already gone. The only way a flame goes out is if has been put out. Trying to replicate a feeling once it has sailed will only lead to disappointment. The organic compound of the original can’t be topped and will only have the feeling of “chasing the dragon”. Don’t live in another moment, live in the one worth living. Nice piece!

[Onlyme]

Yes, I do agree.

[Chris Shaw]

So much warmth and love in this little write Dee, as well as yearning. Nicely expressed.

Chris

[Onlyme]

Thank you Chris.

[송지ፏ..]

What does soppy mean? But it was nice! I liked the line 'throbbing of your
heartbeat
resonating inside
me by virtue'

It sounded nice!

[Onlyme]

Soppy means showing or feeling too much emotion such as love or sympathy, rather than being reasonable in control of your emotions or feelings.

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Oh okay thanks!

[Onlyme]

your welcome. I saw your message. I will do them later okay. :)

[Neville]

Soulfully soppy and true... a sweet little devotion and only a heartbeat away..... Neville

[Onlyme]

Thank you, Neville.

[Neville]

You are most welcome.... Neville

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

That's what love is all about. Deep, passionate and should always resonate inside you. Wonderful poem Dee :)

[Onlyme]

Thank you, SKY.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome Dee.

[Weeping willow]

Lovely write to the sounds of love ;-]

[Onlyme]

Thank you, Weeping willow.😊

[Ghost]

Nice way to tell someone you love them is to tell straight up... Nice when it is a shared love.. Thanks for sharing

[Onlyme]

Agreed and so true, you can not tell them enough.

[wordman]

only you,the magic word we all love to hear

[Onlyme]

Thank you, wordman. 😊

[wordman]

my pleasure