Sweetest Sensations.
A Poem by
Onlyme
A tender touch
a gentle caress
a soft kiss
that sweetest whisper
into my ear
that tickled
lightly as you did.
I smiled
I giggled
we holding hands
A deeper passionate
longing kiss
between my
bosom
and then
a gentle sensation
of your fingertips
running down my
naked skin
on my back.
I get feelings of
come alive.
And emotions
of an awakening
an arousing deep inside.
Sheer heavenly ecstasy
produced by the simplest
of acts
performed by you.
Smiles.
© 2018 Onlyme
Reviews
the romantic You, teasing, alluring and waking, even in the spirit, I love how Your loving passionate poem started slowly then it developed deeper into the prefect hidden places, and that's how Love should be!
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Aw Light, You are such a glorious loving sweet soul too. Hugs.
Beautiful words about gentle sensations! Well writen from the first line to the last! Well done!
Posted 6 Years Ago
Beautiful words about gentle sensations! Well writen from the first line to the last! Well done!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you, Ms Paragon. Bless you
It is a poem composed with so much love and attention. It flows gently like a river.
Posted 6 Years Ago
It is a poem composed with so much love and attention. It flows gently like a river.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you, Devashish. For your lovely comment.
This is not overly sexualized and very sensual and romantic. It captures the emotion of how it feels to touch and be touched and the meaning behind it. It captures love
Posted 6 Years Ago
This is not overly sexualized and very sensual and romantic. It captures the emotion of how it feels to touch and be touched and the meaning behind it. It captures love
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you KeeD. That was what I was aiming for!
One simple touch is all it takes to set off a chain reaction that lights up the whole room. It’s recognizing what factors into those light touches that draws a fever. It’s important to be mindful. That carnal desire.
Posted 6 Years Ago
One simple touch is all it takes to set off a chain reaction that lights up the whole room. It’s recognizing what factors into those light touches that draws a fever. It’s important to be mindful. That carnal desire.
You've captured that feeling Dee in your words. Well done.
Chris
Posted 6 Years Ago
You've captured that feeling Dee in your words. Well done.
Chris
just a touch from the one you love is all it takes
Posted 6 Years Ago
just a touch from the one you love is all it takes
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you, wordman.
6 Years Ago
you know that you`re welcome miss dee
It works both ways, more so I believe on the woman's part.. But us men like the light touches as well.. Thanks for sharing
Posted 6 Years Ago
It works both ways, more so I believe on the woman's part.. But us men like the light touches as well.. Thanks for sharing
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
I do agree, but was just a try out poem or two on this subject for me.😊
This is the way a body comes alive. The way excitement weaves through every pore until ecstasy makes one feel unbeatable. :)
Posted 6 Years Ago
This is the way a body comes alive. The way excitement weaves through every pore until ecstasy makes one feel unbeatable. :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Why thank you, Relic
The sensations must be a waking disease here :) very loving passionate write you have so given to see
Posted 6 Years Ago
The sensations must be a waking disease here :) very loving passionate write you have so given to see
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you Jon. 😊
6 Years Ago
Your are very welcome Dee
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