Just Take Notice Please.

Just Take Notice Please.

A Story by Onlyme

The Song is One more Light by Linkin Park


This song always got to me.
Particularly because of the lead singer,
of this awesome band, Committed Suicide
as he really did understand and relate.
To humanity and pain and how others
truly languished in this world. As he
did himself and expressed his
own feelings. Through his band's songs.

To Chester and every single soul, passed.
But never to be forgotten. Not Ever!
Who,  have tragically taken their own life.
Who,  are we to judge?
We have not walked in their paths or shoes!
And to suddenly exit! 
From this world and life in general.
Is tragic. To say the least.
And to me shows me how much overwhelming
self-suffering one could not bear as well as
ultimate feelings of abandonment and loneliness
and self-demise  for someone to do this
must go beyond feelings of torment and
anguish to do the ultimate
the act that makes them unable to return
forever on this planet called earth and
life!

Suffering is no joke.
Pain and anguish to beyond
hell is no joke!
Let is alone suffering in silence
 and no one  knowing
or understanding
is unforgivable
and beyond
unfortunate.


But they felt they
were at their wits end!
And did what they
did, because off.
Those extreme unwanted
feelings!

Please look out for each
other and notice if someone
seems to be acting a little strange
or different slightly. And try to talk
to them. Or just be there for them
as a true friend. Even in silences
that shows you care about them.
Even a hug.
It is a start to show
you really do give
a damn!

© 2018 Onlyme


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This is great way to show a path of life full with examples....the third para of this story I loved to go through the most...undeniable truth suffering is no joke!!
Well expressed Dee...thanks for sharing..and do keep writing!☺

Posted 6 Years Ago


Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thanks Tahsin.Z, sadly I or no one should be having to write poetry about this subject. But sadly we.. read more
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6 Years Ago

I understand all the thoughts behind this write...and you're brave to pull it out! Heartedly welcome.. read more

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Added on June 25, 2018
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Tags: death, sucide. notice, care.

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