Oh-BOY!
It's amazing how many times I've wished those same words, Dee.
Just think of all we could do in so very many ways, and imagine the power one would wield with a magic wand … whew, what an intoxicating thought.
I love the poignant beauty of your words, all the inspiration, promise, and unselfishness you express in such a compassionate and empathetic way … it reveals the person you are, the depth and caring heart that beats within you.
"I wish, I could heal you
and make you whole again
and put a big fat grin
upon your face
yet again!"
Fraught with emotion and metaphor, you pull us into your moment … this is what excellent Free Verse poetry is all about.
You've really touched me to the core with this one, Dee … brightest blessings! ⁓ Richard : )
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Richard, Bless you for your wonderfulness and sweetness at being simple you Richard. A true gentlema.. read moreRichard, Bless you for your wonderfulness and sweetness at being simple you Richard. A true gentleman And thank also for your kindness in liking my poem.
6 Years Ago
It's your fault, Dee! ; )
I calls 'em as they come.
Oh-BOY!
It's amazing how many times I've wished those same words, Dee.
Just think of all we could do in so very many ways, and imagine the power one would wield with a magic wand … whew, what an intoxicating thought.
I love the poignant beauty of your words, all the inspiration, promise, and unselfishness you express in such a compassionate and empathetic way … it reveals the person you are, the depth and caring heart that beats within you.
"I wish, I could heal you
and make you whole again
and put a big fat grin
upon your face
yet again!"
Fraught with emotion and metaphor, you pull us into your moment … this is what excellent Free Verse poetry is all about.
You've really touched me to the core with this one, Dee … brightest blessings! ⁓ Richard : )
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Richard, Bless you for your wonderfulness and sweetness at being simple you Richard. A true gentlema.. read moreRichard, Bless you for your wonderfulness and sweetness at being simple you Richard. A true gentleman And thank also for your kindness in liking my poem.
6 Years Ago
It's your fault, Dee! ; )
I calls 'em as they come.
Ah Magic wand.... :) sprinkle some fairy dust...take away the pain from our loved ones...wouldn't life be beautiful....if we could just add those small magic touch...
May be we can.... we keep thinking we need a wand...:)
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Exactly Ardra. If we all could would it come true.
A magic wand in everyone's wish list of life almost...I guess!!
In the hope of fulfilling longing desires like you expressed here one of yours...maybe this wand is hidden in us...gotta find it sooner may....thanks for sharing Dee😊