If only, I had a magic wand.

If only, I had a magic wand.

A Poem by Onlyme

Everything is a drama
everything is a nightmare
no matter
how you
look at things
all you see
is bad!

Oh, how I wish?
with clear blue eyes
you saw
a brighter outlook
on the horizon
instead
of bad.

Dread and pain
and suffering
all
it
does
is eat away
at you.
All the time
That really is so sad!

I wish, I could heal you
and make you whole again
and put a big fat grin
upon your face
yet again!

© 2018 Onlyme


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

Oh-BOY!
It's amazing how many times I've wished those same words, Dee.
Just think of all we could do in so very many ways, and imagine the power one would wield with a magic wand … whew, what an intoxicating thought.
I love the poignant beauty of your words, all the inspiration, promise, and unselfishness you express in such a compassionate and empathetic way … it reveals the person you are, the depth and caring heart that beats within you.
"I wish, I could heal you
and make you whole again
and put a big fat grin
upon your face
yet again!"
Fraught with emotion and metaphor, you pull us into your moment … this is what excellent Free Verse poetry is all about.

You've really touched me to the core with this one, Dee … brightest blessings! ⁓ Richard : )

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

6 Years Ago

How sweet, Marilyn,
Was that meant for Dee or me?
marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

both of you, of course also love Dee's poem as you do,,, be well and happy always
Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Richard and Marilyn.



Reviews

Oh-BOY!
It's amazing how many times I've wished those same words, Dee.
Just think of all we could do in so very many ways, and imagine the power one would wield with a magic wand … whew, what an intoxicating thought.
I love the poignant beauty of your words, all the inspiration, promise, and unselfishness you express in such a compassionate and empathetic way … it reveals the person you are, the depth and caring heart that beats within you.
"I wish, I could heal you
and make you whole again
and put a big fat grin
upon your face
yet again!"
Fraught with emotion and metaphor, you pull us into your moment … this is what excellent Free Verse poetry is all about.

You've really touched me to the core with this one, Dee … brightest blessings! ⁓ Richard : )

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

6 Years Ago

How sweet, Marilyn,
Was that meant for Dee or me?
marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

both of you, of course also love Dee's poem as you do,,, be well and happy always
Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Richard and Marilyn.
Ah Magic wand.... :) sprinkle some fairy dust...take away the pain from our loved ones...wouldn't life be beautiful....if we could just add those small magic touch...
May be we can.... we keep thinking we need a wand...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Exactly Ardra. If we all could would it come true.
[send message][befriend] Subscribe
¿
A magic wand in everyone's wish list of life almost...I guess!!
In the hope of fulfilling longing desires like you expressed here one of yours...maybe this wand is hidden in us...gotta find it sooner may....thanks for sharing Dee😊

Posted 6 Years Ago


Onlyme

6 Years Ago

If only, I could wave that magic wand!
¿

6 Years Ago

Hehe!!.....😇

2
next Next Page
last Last Page
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

482 Views
13 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on June 25, 2018
Last Updated on June 25, 2018
Tags: wish, want, would like

Author

Onlyme
Onlyme

United Kingdom



Writing
Dawn Dawn

A Poem by Onlyme



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


moonbeat moonbeat

A Poem by lightsong


Aimer Aimer

A Poem by lightsong


Couplet~ Couplet~

A Poem by lightsong