If only, I had a magic wand.

Everything is a drama

everything is a nightmare

no matter

how you

look at things

all you see

is bad!

Oh, how I wish?

with clear blue eyes

you saw

a brighter outlook

on the horizon

instead

of bad.

Dread and pain

and suffering

all

it

does

is eat away

at you.

All the time

That really is so sad!

I wish, I could heal you

and make you whole again

and put a big fat grin

upon your face

yet again!

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Oh-BOY!
It's amazing how many times I've wished those same words, Dee.
Just think of all we could do in so very many ways, and imagine the power one would wield with a magic wand … whew, what an intoxicating thought.
I love the poignant beauty of your words, all the inspiration, promise, and unselfishness you express in such a compassionate and empathetic way … it reveals the person you are, the depth and caring heart that beats within you.
"I wish, I could heal you
and make you whole again
and put a big fat grin
upon your face
yet again!"
Fraught with emotion and metaphor, you pull us into your moment … this is what excellent Free Verse poetry is all about.

You've really touched me to the core with this one, Dee … brightest blessings! ⁓ Richard : )

[Onlyme]

Richard, Bless you for your wonderfulness and sweetness at being simple you Richard. A true gentleman And thank also for your kindness in liking my poem.

[Richard🖌]

It's your fault, Dee! ; )
I calls 'em as they come.

[marilyn 1225]

you ARE giving and sweet natured,,

[Richard🖌]

How sweet, Marilyn,
Was that meant for Dee or me?

[marilyn 1225]

both of you, of course also love Dee's poem as you do,,, be well and happy always

[Onlyme]

Thank you, Richard and Marilyn.

[Aaron]

beautifully written. In love with it

[Onlyme]

Thank you Aeron. Bless you.

[lightsong]

dear Dee, You just reminded me with a previous account on another site, my name there was (magicrod) in the meaning of (magic wand), and I wrote a sentence on my profile saying (magicrod is spreading love all over the world)! it's like we are the same here, Your sweet sweet sweet piece might be just a simple written poem for some, but for me, it holds a great big heart, a loving one and a giving spirit, it's a beautiful prayer, and it flew in my ears like a song... thank You for sharing Your dreams, sweetness and loveliness with us all.

[Onlyme]

Light, Thank you for your true shining light of a gift you give us all in this vast world. You share the love like myself. hugs

[lightsong]

the thanks goes to You, for having this beautiful heart and soul~ all the warmest blessings***

[Onlyme]

Thank you for the compliment but it takes one to know one. hugs.

[lightsong]

the thanks goes to You, for having this beautiful heart and soul~ all the warmest blessings***

[splattercore]

When one fire is put out, another one starts. The only question is who the arsonist is. Could it be your actions or reactions. There are those who cause you harm and those who make it easy to take a swing at. I would definitely say keep that faucet running because I'm sure you're going to need all the water you can fill in your bucket. Who is it going to be today?

[Onlyme]

Oh dear, just is life, none of us are perfect. But to share love is gift. Nothing more.
read moreOh dear, just is life, none of us are perfect. But to share love is gift. Nothing more.

[sette]

and maybe there is what can be termed as self less love in reality

[Onlyme]

I think we all need to have self less love in reality.. Each and everyone of us. I do agree.

[Kami]

Great reminder of perception and how our "realities" differ from one another. Ultimately, WE each choose our reality. Thank you for sharing!

[Onlyme]

Thanks Kami. That is true. What you stated above.

[Chris Shaw]

Such a generous heart you have Dee. If you had a magic wand you would be everyone's fairy godmother

Chris

[Onlyme]

Thanks Chris. No, i am far from perfect. Just soft hearted at time.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Dee, you are a ray of purest sunshine breaking through the dark. Your touching words reach out to those who are depressed and/or suffering to let them know you, Dee herself, CARES about them! Nothing is better than that. Lovely verse form, cadence, rhyme, humorous ending. Loved it.

[Onlyme]

Annette, you a true Gem. That makes the simplest of day. A pleasure when you are around.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

:))))).......... xo

[Rebecca J Martin]

Awww that was SO beautiful!!! When I read it, I actually was thinking of myself... I suffer from Kidney disease which has resulted in chronic kidney stones (suffered most of the last 3 years on a daily basis)... I am SO very lucky to have such wonderful family and boyfriend in my life... Their kindness and not giving up on seeing me in pain has truly helped to 'save' me... I now grin through the pain (which was my fave part of your poem)... I make jokes, write poetry (I have a kidney stone poem u might enjoy on here ;)!!! Your words are very wise to those of us suffering and the ones living with the ones suffering :) Ty again for sharing!!!

[Onlyme]

Aw Rebecca, what a beautiful young lady you are. You made my day. Bless you. I wish for you comfort, loveand happiness always and where the pain stops and your truly content. you have a beautiful soul.

[Rebecca J Martin]

Awww that was beyond sweetness!!! Thank you from a true heart to another... U too have a beautiful soul as well, it is written in your words!!! :) Bless your heart! I look forward to reading more! :)

[Onlyme]

As, do I yours hugs from me to you.

[Rebecca J Martin]

(((Hugs))))

[Coyote Poetry]

Would be nice to have a magic wand.
"I wish, I could heal you
and make you whole again
and put a big fat grin
upon your face
yet again!"
I liked the above lines. Honest and so good said. Thank you Dee for sharing the amazing poetry.

[Onlyme]

Coyote Poetry, you are too kind.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this one Dee and you are welcome.

[Stella Armour]

You have that magic wand Dee, it is inside of you.... now think about it and get the magic going :)

[Onlyme]

Ah Stella, you give anyone the inspiration, to wave that wand. :)