Time.

Time.

A Poem by Onlyme

Time is like a ticking time bomb
each moment in time is precious
you can  value each second, minute
or even hour!

Or wastefully, do nothing just ideally
procrastinate and let time,
pass you by
Your choice to do either
productively or the
opposite of said
above.

Choose wisely, grasshopper!

© 2018 Onlyme


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OH I LOVE the Grasshopper ending!!! Was one of my FAVE shows growing up... and omg I can't even think of the name of it lol... but your words here ring true! It makes me think of my ex-husband (who is my best friend to this day). He's a work-a-holic, has been since I knew him. One day we were talking (after he had gall-bladder removal surgery), he tells me that he hates sleeping (after he was obviously told he needs rest to heal!), I ask "Why?"... His answer, "Because, I feel guilty like while I sleep, my life is wasting away, there's SO much I could be doing!"... So when I say this rings true... I mean it, but sadly some overdue it (he passed out in a store about 3 months after his surgery... scared the eebie jeebies out of our daughter who was with him... he's ok now :). )

Posted 6 Years Ago


Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Glad to hear he is okay, and you liked it. :)
Rebecca J Martin

6 Years Ago

thanx :) :)
Love the way you use the words to make such a good piece. Nice work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thank you Alexandra G.
Aiding us in wisdom and humor. Very good combination. Time is so valuable. Kudos

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Sami.
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome, Dee.
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Oh, I loved the kick at last...grasshopper!!!
Our now becomes the past in seconds and future becomes another now in that hilarious speed of seconds....Time the old gypsy man behind it all!!
Amazing read Dee!☺

Posted 6 Years Ago


Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed it, :)

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Added on June 25, 2018
Last Updated on June 25, 2018
Tags: time, value, no waste

Author

Onlyme
Onlyme

United Kingdom



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A Poem by Onlyme