Flaws & Choices!

Flaws & Choices!

A Poem by Onlyme


Each and every one of us.
All have human flaws.
No one is perfect.
As we all know!

But the characteristics,
of our very own downfalls.
Make
us all unique
and adds
to our
personality
to
make us
individuals
to stand
more
from the
crowds.

The paths
we
choose,
the
choices we make
profoundly
add
to the
great mix!

Of who
we are
to become
eventually!

Before we die!

Flaws do not make us perfect
they make us human
as well as vulnerable
and primate.




© 2018 Onlyme


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good, solid write. great food for thought and a wise reminder for us all.

"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away." - Thoreau

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thank you Pete, enjoy reading your review. Bless you.



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A strong message. All of us are flawed in some way. Not one of us is perfect. Knowing what our flaws are and working on them, will help make us a better person. Thank you Dee


Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thank You Chris.
good, solid write. great food for thought and a wise reminder for us all.

"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away." - Thoreau

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thank you Pete, enjoy reading your review. Bless you.
Your message is a timely one for these days when people are not very kind to each other, nor to themselves. Your message encourages people from both directions – other people are worth getting to know & learning to understand . . . and also we can stand to own our own imperfections as we become more self-honest & self-accepting. To become comfortable with flaws is one of the main strengths of good writing, being able to portray a villain that still evokes some feelings of connection, etc. Love your straightforward writing style (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thank you Margie, for your straightforward review and understanding nature. Hugs Dee.

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Added on June 23, 2018
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Tags: flaws, choices, Lifes, highway, journey, life

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Onlyme
Onlyme

United Kingdom



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