Ramblings of my Wandering Thoughts!

Ramblings of my Wandering Thoughts!

A Poem by Onlyme

Would it be wonderful to be "Perfect"
whatever does that mean?

Never doing wrong,  always being right
getting every done properly.
Being super clever, so bright
Never doubting oneself,
Everything falling in to place.

What a dull life it would be.
As everything would just fit
so easily!

Pondering my wandering thoughts!

© 2018 Onlyme


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Exactly what I think when I don't get scholar like marks in exams!!
I mean in the crowd of so many scholars am the only stupid if,....then am unique and rare...that's what we should be happy and thankful of....Perfects are good...but sometimes bland no?!😀
Great thoughts explored😊

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thank you. Yes Bland they are. Tahsin. Z insight and great thoughts enjoyed your review.
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6 Years Ago

Oh! You're heartedly welcome Dee😊😊
Onlyme

6 Years Ago

hugs. Tahsin.Z



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A good subject for a poem Dee, once a person has obtained the perfect whatever, where do
they go from there. There are so many famous people in the news lately for
taking there own life. They would appear to have the perfect life, but sadly
they must not of seen it that way once they had reached the top and achieved what most
people can only dream of.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thank you Phill for your wonderful insight thoughts. And sadly so true. Many a famous person have e.. read more
Well, im perfectly imperfect and glad to be so. Sounds like way too much effort to me. I would need to start combing my hair, ironing my clothes and 386 other things too, just to be presentable. :)
I have known a few people who thought they were though, but they soon showed the flaw of being selfish when I pointed out some of their imperfections :)
Flaws are what make us unique and human, giving us our character. At least that's what I tell myself when I look in the mirror. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thank you Lorry, Loved your thoughts and observations of humans in general. Bless you.
Lorry

6 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
You would have nothing to aim for in life. Thank goodness Dee there will always be room for improvement in everything we do. Somewhere I think my Beth had a Richard Hargreaves book on Little Miss Perfect. It would be fun to find it. Rambling minds, always find good poetry topics.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Well said Christine, always something to improve on within us all!
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Exactly what I think when I don't get scholar like marks in exams!!
I mean in the crowd of so many scholars am the only stupid if,....then am unique and rare...that's what we should be happy and thankful of....Perfects are good...but sometimes bland no?!😀
Great thoughts explored😊

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thank you. Yes Bland they are. Tahsin. Z insight and great thoughts enjoyed your review.
¿

6 Years Ago

Oh! You're heartedly welcome Dee😊😊
Onlyme

6 Years Ago

hugs. Tahsin.Z

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Added on June 22, 2018
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Tags: ramblings, wandering, thoughts, thinking, wondering

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Onlyme
Onlyme

United Kingdom



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A Poem by Onlyme