Updated & Clearer Version! I do hope of What true love is to me at least.

Updated & Clearer Version! I do hope of What true love is to me at least.

A Story by Onlyme

Have you ever loved someone that much, that it actually hurts?
And I don't mean loving them for physical pleasures alone
Or because of how they look on the outside i.e. facial features.
As beauty is only skin deep to me.
I am talking about the concept  that love goes beyond those
acts of looking and feeling and touching.

I am talking about. In sickness and in health. Like when you marry
someone. In good times and bad times. Being their for them
completely no matter what. When at times, you maybe just feel
like running away from them. And never returning. Which would
be so easy. Like divorces happen ten a penny nowadays.

As some people feel why waste time. Move on to the next person
and try again afresh with them instead. Whereas long time ago.
When my grandparents where younger. They worked through 
hard times. And stuck together no matter what. Even if they did or
did not have  kids. They would tried to make it work. And sort out 
problems head on and and solve things together. As being in a 
relationship or marriage they would do.

I guess iam saying. Love now a days. Is all about casual sex. And
relationship over time that fade and die. Instead of working on
the relationship together they slip and go seperate ways. Or maybe
Even have extra marital affairs. And stay together or be married just
for the sake of the kids in general. To the other person they think
everything is
sweet between them when it oblivious of the cheating
going on by the other partner. Until maybe one
day they are found out. They are cheating and all hell breaks lose. No marriage is easy. No relationship is easy. It is like life you have to work on it. To make it work. And that works both ways you both have to comit and try and make it work together
 and not to just give in at the first bad spell.

© 2018 Onlyme


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I have.
"Have you ever loved someone that much, that it actually hurts?"
When the love is true. Someone become our everything. I agree with you. New world, people move to quickly. Need to slow down and make love more sweeter and kinder. Thank you Dee for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote



Posted 6 Years Ago


Onlyme

6 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote. for your opinion and understanding way.
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are welcome Dee. I enjoyed your work.

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Added on June 12, 2018
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Tags: love, working at it, honesty. openess.

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