What True Love Is? Well To Me At Least.

Have you ever loved someone that much, that it actually hurts? And I do not mean loving them for physical pleasures. Or because of how they look on the outside i.e. facial features.  As beauty is only skin deep.

I am talking about the characterizations that love that is more than just those above. Sensual activities.

It is when two minds met and become one soul united in one body. And even in good times. And through wicked evil times. You are still with them. When all you want to do is run away and hide. But you cannot because you love them so much.

It is like loving someone for years . And then they take seriously ill with a devastating illness. Or have been involved in a wicked accident. That has affected them serious both physically or mentally. To say the least.

That is when true love kicks in. Not the type of fake love. All about good times and romance. But in really hardship times and sad times. And troubled times. That is the type of true love. I am on about. That is real love meaningfully so.

Being there for that special person . And you are going to be the best you can be for them and for you both. Why because you love them. That is why. True love. And has no agenda or rules. Nothing in life is Easy. If it is true love it is forever. No matter what.

Reviews

[Akki]

Honestly, I don't understand what it was? Is it poem or just thoughts or anything? But, your lines touches my heart.

But, I'm not agreed with your last stanza. True love is something that don't need any reason to show. Because, true love is unconditional, unmeasurable and pseudo.

Everyone don't get chance to prove there love to someone they really love that not means there love is fake. Sometimes, you have to let your love to go because you think you're not able to that person. Sometimes, you have to let your love to go because you missed all the opportunities to show your love to that person. Sometimes, you even don't get chance to spend few minutes with that person you love.

Do you know? There are many lovers who let his or her love because they don't get back same feeling from that person.

In true love, there is only one thing matters which is happiness of person that they love. It maybe anything and true lover is ready to paid anything whatever it takes. Even true lover help their lover to getting her or his love.

[Onlyme]

Thank you for this very insight review and comments. I have to agree with what you said. Along with what I myself did write. Love also is unconditional,unmeasurable and pseudo.

[wordman]

true love is hard to find,but when you do you know you have something special

[Onlyme]

I do agree Ron. And thanks for your thoughts.

[wordman]

you`re welcome dawn

[Onlyme]

Thanks Ron.

[wordman]

alway`s a pleasure to read you

[Einstein Noodle]

hmmmm not really a story per se! but some sound truths discovered after going over the roads of it .. i try to tell my kids that love is not the overwhelming moment but the persistent and trusted ..."i can't stand that about you; and i'm not leaving because of it!" ... the "i do" must occur over and over and over until the deep love you speak of blooms and grows ... rough edges worn away .. and the deep beauty of "golden years" are the reward .... great thoughts on on of the most important decisions we make ...the U. of Iowa is offering a free on-line class on short story writing in July ... called a MOOC ... if your interested in it i will send you a link ;)
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[Onlyme]

Yes please Einstein, none of this is my fortay but I would love to give it a go. Thank Einstein. Nothing ventured nothing gained. :)

[Einstein Noodle]

i took a poetry class from them last year that i really enjoyed ... character development, plot, and the expansion in poetry was said to be the inspiration for many plays, movies, books etc. .. a natural connection ... ;) i have been thinking of trying a short story or two and this may be just the inspiration i need ...
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[Onlyme]

Thanks, Einstein.😘

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ...................

[Akash gaikwad]

A part of your poetry reminded me of song's lines.

"I guess I've been bruised if we were to speak plain
Every bruise that comes to flesh, makes it mark on the brain"
True loves hurts you but leaves it mark on the brain." Jr Jr - Skelton


The thoughts that you have shared I also I had same thoughts months ago but I moved on from it because I thought I am just 21 and there is whole life ahead me to discover it so why to worry.

[Onlyme]

So glad to hear you moved on in your own life. And loved the quote from the poem and who it was from.

[Riddhi]

I liked this..Actually , you know in this world of machines , sometimes i feel that emotions in people are becoming less...Sometimes i feel that even people have become like machines...They work , they earn and they think that is what life is...They think that if they earn a lot of money , that is what is success to them..But what this success is worth of if they don't have someone to share their happiness with..to share their feelings..Even the bond between family seems like an outdated thing today...You described what true love is very nicely..And you are true in saying that nothing in this life is easy...
Keep on writing...

[Onlyme]

Thank you Riddhi, I do agree with you totally. About emotions in people are becoming less. Exactly in this modern day and age. It is work, money, sleep, Do it all over again next day.

[Riddhi]

Yes...You are correct...